my poem

Sitting in the corner with a knife in her hand
All the stress of the months has caused her mind to snap
So much sorrow this girl has felt through the years
Could easily fill a river full of salty tears

The knife feels heavy; there is a buzzing in her mind
Soon everything will be different there will be no pain
No sorry or sorrow, no stress or tension, finally no worries
Alas she will be at peace, free from the all the excuse stories

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shudnt this b n SHAIRY

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Aisha my dear, i hope this is not u sitting in the corner with a knife in your hand.

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rupay i hope not too.. and wow i deliberatly opened it in cafe and it was not moved! i wonder why? :konfused:

OIC, glad to hear it!

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yup! :)

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lol MODS r not too gud at their job i gues :p

nice poem

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great poem aisha!

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banda kabhi kabhi khushi ki baat bhi ker laita hay :vivo:

Nice poem . . .

actually if the knife is used, there’s only peace on the surface of earth to the seeing eyes, but internally down under is endless turmoil, torture and grief…which is endless

There’s no peace for those contemplating suicide…otherwise it wud’ve been not frowned upon in all cultures.

life is such a beautiful gift…
if happy tis very short and quick
the tides get longer ofcourse,
when 'n where there’s remorse
though dare i shall say
forever the darkness will not stay
the Almighy above is all there and watching
do we give a chance to hope launching?
I see a ray of light shimmering on horizon
oh wait before you decide to jump before the bison!
The knife may seem so promising towards eternal peace
its only a false glimmer into an abyse that increase
So better it is to give life another chance to soar high
Its so much more nicer than to give up and die

Okay I can go on forever :silly: … but hopefully that delivers the message. Oh and I’m sure glad to hear that wasn’t voicing out ur own feelings Aisha, u gave me such an instant scare.

Peace Out!

V

haha i guess so:p

thanks

thank you voicey :slight_smile:

lol yeh wala nahi itna khushi ki baat karta !

thanx

umm thank you V