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[FONT=Times New Roman]Dim light surrounded by darkness
[FONT=Times New Roman]Seems like me and all my loneliness
[FONT=Times New Roman]With the candle lay’s your picture aside
[FONT=Times New Roman]Every night my emotions trapped inside
[FONT=Times New Roman]Missing you every moment I’m awake
[FONT=Times New Roman]Till it hurt’s more than I can take
[FONT=Times New Roman]Then comes water from my eye’s
[FONT=Times New Roman]which some call tears
[FONT=Times New Roman]I call them drops with feelings
[FONT=Times New Roman]trapped within all these years
[FONT=Times New Roman]life has gone past, time has flown
[FONT=Times New Roman]and with time, my loneliness has grown<o:p></o:p>
[FONT=Times New Roman]then fall’s a drop, on the single lit candle
[FONT=Times New Roman]the fire is off, my eyes close, I start 2 dream
[FONT=Times New Roman]now in another world I begin to tangle
[FONT=Times New Roman]then I see you and there flow’s another stream:teary3:
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[FONT=Times New Roman]im not gud at this stuff but i would like 2 know wat u think about it
Re: My poem...
You need to FIX it by removing extra words plz...for better read
Re: My poem...
Aww... poor soul. Trust me time teaches and helps us all to move on until one day it doesn't hurts at all, and all u have is just good memories that makes u smile only. God Willing!