My poem...."missing ya"

Here is my own poem, well i m not really into poetry, but i dunno sometimes when feelings n emotions just want to adopt face of words they come as poetry…

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I am living without you
Imagine how it is difficult to do
My heart is alone too much
It can get relief, but only if you touch
If you want to see me happy and bright,
Then promise to hold my hand tight
I think of you every day,
And you know what I say when I pray?
That oh, God, give me enough strength to bear
All that tears which come in my eyes due of my dear,
And give my friend more and more pleasure
Because my friend is only my treasure
You know then what my heart says?
That there will be no more worries in our ways
Because very soon our day will come
To be together, and have some fun
This fun will remain for end
Because I am your true and forever friend
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^ Love Is Greater Than Patience Can Ever Be ^

Beautiful poem... now moved from Image Gallery to Poetry Forum.

beautiful poem .... & welcome ONE BASH ...

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thanks but welcome for????????


^ Love Is Greater Than Patience Can Ever Be ^

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very hi nice kakay-B…
keep up the good work…

thanx 4 posting te sharing…

God bless u all…

DerVisH


Ai khuda jazba-e-ehsaas na bakhsha hota…
Acha hota ager pather ka tarasha hota…
Waja-e-tehQeer hon insanon mein insan ho ker…
Pather ka hota to inhe insanon ne pooja hota…

Nice


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welcome to poetry forum, didn't saw u here before

very nice! its just wicked OB!

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i like poetry but when ever i think n try do a bit of it, can’t write anything!

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u’ve got it!

best of luck & keep it up!

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oh thanks for that…

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^ Love Is Greater Than Patience Can Ever Be ^

thanks

your poem is really very nice

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^ Love Is Greater Than Patience Can Ever Be ^

for some reason i feel as if i know u @bash.but lovely poem .who is it for?

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dil to pagal hai

woww such a sweet poem

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good job n thanx 4 sharin!


Keep smilin cuz it makes peple wonder…wut ur up to!
I look like an angel, and act like one, too, but you never know what this angel might do.

Nice

Kool…very nice poem, keep it up

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~Woh mujh se pooch raha tha batao kesa laga
Tum aglay zakhmoN ko choro, yeh ghao kesa laga
Ajab sawal kiya aandhiyoN ne pattoN se
Shajar se toot ke girna batao kesa laga~