hum jaisey logon ka
koi naam kahein laita nahein
sirf baton mein a jatey hein
unn waqfon ki tarha
jo bey mani sey hottey hein
hum bhi youn ji laitey hein
***jaisey humko aisey jeena hai ***
ik zehar hai jo peena hai…
hum jaisey logon ka
koi naam kahein laita nahein…!!!
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Wow. Zabardast... share more of your poetry - i like ur style.
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Nice poem fizkhan :k: Thanx for sharing it with us 
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thanx for appreciation. here is one more...
koi din to aisa ho.....!
Koi din to aisa ho
jub sari duniya tumko chahey
aur tum...mujh per martey ho
**shaam sawerey hur pal merey **
naam ki mala juptey ho
bhor samey ut'they hi...
merey rung rung jatey ho
aey kaash...koi din to aisa ho....!!!
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Fizz... Great one - simple, innocent and very well worded! Your poetry has the lyrical flow which is quite essential for 'nazm'. Keep it up girl!
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bohat achay :k: khas kar the highlighted part
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lovely :k:
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Fiz-k, ji................ Kiya baat hai,
Apke qalam ki kahani..... jaisae jharnon ki Rawaani....
bare achhe aur sachhe khwaab hain aapke, apni khwahishon ko zinda rakhne ke liye likhti rahiye.... khushbash !
Darwesh !
Re: my own poetry.....hum jaisey logon ka....
merey lafz to ab bikharey hein....
kisi k naam
kisi ko yaad karney k liye
koi kalam karney k liye
k jo phool khiltey hein....
woh dil mein mehktey hein...
woh lafz jo kabhi bey mani they...
woh lafz jo mein keh na saki....
un kahey adhoorey lafz....
bilkul meri tarha....
ujaar...
rah taktey...
koi unkaha jumla sun'ney k liye
merey lafz to ab bikhrey hein....!!