my own poetry.....hum jaisey logon ka....

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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hum jaisey logon ka
koi naam kahein laita nahein
sirf baton mein a jatey hein
unn waqfon ki tarha
jo bey mani sey hottey hein
hum bhi youn ji laitey hein
***jaisey humko aisey jeena hai ***
ik farz hai jo jeena hai…
hum jaisey logon ka
koi naam kahein laita nahein…!!!

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Re: my own poetry.....hum jaisey logon ka....

really ap ki own poetry hay.. nice achi koshish hay:)

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Re: my own poetry.....hum jaisey logon ka....

If it is your own poetry, you should post it in "Sho'ara-e-Gupshup" .. phir sub aap kaa naam laiN geY kiouN kaY:

bahut gehraa hai aap kaY khiyaalaat kaa paani :)

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Re: my own poetry…hum jaisey logon ka…

Nice Try :k:

HUM JAISAY LOGON KA (Version II) :slight_smile:

hum jaisey logon ka
koi naam kahein laita nahein
bas baaton mein aa jatey hein
aesay waqfon ki tarha
jo beech dramay aa jatey hein
hum bhi younhi ji laitey hein
***jaisey humko jeena hi hai ***
ek zehr hai jo k peena hi hai
hum jaisey logon ka
koi naam kahein laita nahein…!!!

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Re: my own poetry.....hum jaisey logon ka....

very very nice...

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Re: my own poetry…hum jaisey logon ka…

welldone:k:

Coughing with mouth open
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Re: my own poetry…hum jaisey logon ka…

very nice :k: keep it up but if u r going to post ut own poetry then post it in SHORA E GUPSHUP !! khush rahiye AMin !!

~**~ GEO ~**~ Shoaib malik and sania mirza [merged]
~**~ GEO ~**~ Shoaib malik and sania mirza [merged]
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Re: my own poetry.....hum jaisey logon ka....

bohat khoob weldone

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Re: my own poetry.....hum jaisey logon ka....

thanx a lot for appreciation....i'm really obliged.

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Re: my own poetry.....hum jaisey logon ka....

v nice

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Re: my own poetry.....hum jaisey logon ka....

Try to do something mischievious!!
Phir.....
Badnaam na hoon gay to kia naam na ho ga...
Waisay nice try hai.