my own nazam

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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assalaamu allaeycum friends
yae shair mai nay (kyou chup kay say woh loag…)aik poetry book say leya tha.us kay aggay mai nay khud shairy key hai.ab ap battaee kaesee key hai.

kyou chup kay say woh loag dil may utter jattay hai
jin say kismat kay sittaray nahe miltay

kyou hummay un loaggo key aadat se ho jatty hai
jinhae hum pehly nazar may apna sub kuch maan laytay hai

jinhae hum na deakhae toa hummara din nahee guzarta
jinhae hum deakhae toa hummara dil kabu may nahee rehta

jinkay hum qareeb hokay be un kay hottay nahe
aur jin say duur ho kay be un say juda hottay nahee

jo duur reh kar be kushe deattay hai
aur joa pass ho kar be gaam daytay hai

phir woh he baat aajatty hai
kyou chup kay say woh loag dil may utter jattay hai
jin say kismat kay sittaray nahe miltay

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always keep smiling because it can do nothing but win many hearts

[This message has been edited by 2629 (edited March 06, 2002).]

[This message has been edited by 2629 (edited March 06, 2002).]

[This message has been edited by 2629 (edited March 06, 2002).]

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2629 do you know somebody copied your sheir just around 7-8 years back?

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And the “copied” sheir goes like this:
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KiuN chupke sey utar jaatey heiN dil meiN wo log
jin logoN sey qismat ke sitarey nahi miltey
**

By the way, if you like poetry, why don’t you give yourself a decent screen name instead of a number plate?

MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…

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Buhat Khoob ...

سكورپین کنگ
§©ö®Þïoñ_kîñg

Even If You Are Basically Stupid
You Can Still Meet Nice People !

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Nice :slight_smile:
keep it up

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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa’N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
~~~~~~~~~

~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

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[quote]
Originally posted by Amal:
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2629 do you know somebody copied your sheir just around 7-8 years back?

http://www3.pak.org/gupshup/smilies/wink.gif

And the “copied” sheir goes like this:
**
KiuN chupke sey utar jaatey heiN dil meiN wo log
jin logoN sey qismat ke sitarey nahi miltey

http://www3.pak.org/gupshup/smilies/hehe.gif

http://www3.pak.org/gupshup/smilies/hehe.gif

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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa’N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
~~~~~~~~~

~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

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sorry mai nazam kay upper yae likhana bohal gae the.
yae shair mai nay (kyou chup kay say woh loag...)aik poetry book say leya tha.us kay aggay mai nay khud shairy key hai.ab ap battaee kaesee key hai.

always keep smiling because it can do nothing but win many hearts

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speed master
chand_chehra
thank you

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always keep smiling because it can do nothing but win many hearts

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hello plz battaee apne apne raee..

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always keep smiling because it can do nothing but win many hearts

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hello

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everyone

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always keep smiling because it can do nothing but win many hearts

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buhat khube.
thanks 4 sharing.

**zamiiR_e_sadaf mein kiran kaa mauqaam
anokhe anokhe thikaane tere

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nice

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thanks 4 all

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always keep smiling because it can do nothing but win many hearts