Titli Productions Present: Kabhi Kabhi Pyar Mai.. Do watch and comment 
Wah bey wah Aisha jee :)
Let me give you comments as you requested...
lekin me give honest comments ok...
mind nahin karna plz...just an honest opinion...
Camera work: very good. very steadily done. **
**Story line: good, wese baap bohat jald maan gaya :p
Cast: good cast, couple sach much couple hai kya?...arey kya sajtee hai joreee :D ;)
Actors: **
*-*Girl: smiled a lot. which is good (Allah usko smile he karte rakhain!) but at certain points she shoudve been more serious...examples: when her guy fones her when she is sitting outside and she sez her dad wont agree and stuff...kuch sad emotions dikhanay chaheeye thay...she smiled and laughed a lil when answering...next time a lil more sadness perhaps in the acting...
-Guy: Shuru mai he was very smiley as well (Allah usko be khush rakahain!). like when they discussed her father n stuff...he sed sum things like why and stuff lekin a bit more powerfull emotion...like ghussa or sumfin and that he would stand up and talk and move his arms around more...thats what me missed...
-Father: kya wo 4 months later be same suit pehn kay aya? lolz j/k hehehe...
barra handsome and kool father hai ;)...when he walkes away the first time he meets the guy...he walks away in this kool guy from the hood type style...barree hansee ayee...kitna kool baap :D
p.s. where was the mom? shaadi pay bhi nahin dekhi?...
Sound: was ok lekin sumtimes it was hard to hear what was being sed...kuch air ki awaaz thi beech mai...
Environment: very lovely. kya yeh Dubai tha? looks amazing...
Music: haye hayeee very nice...me love that song...
Overall opinion: nice small movie :) and thankoo so much for sharing. hope to see more soon!
Let me know what you think of my comments ok :)
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oh thank you! this was my final exam lol jo aaj maine submit kya hai :p i know about the sound :( too bad i didnt use mics!
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hey dun worry!
me dint say its not good ok!
lekin final exam kis cheez mai?
and once again: movie achee hai and its a good job done really...
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since start one thing that bugged me aisha was camera work .. when girl is taking drink outta vending machine and then seeing the phone and talking, camera followed her.. its better if u have a less moving camera, and let her move within the frame.. gives a better visual experience..
without mics is fine, but in the end, as the shadi background music ended, right away the credit music started, both of them (in my opinion) should be faded out a bit before introducing the next one..
oh well, fine effort nonetheless :k:
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weldone Aisha :k:
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thank you faizy and ahmer! :)
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hey, how can i see you movie? Is it anywhere else?
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I can’t see it DW 
you closed the account!!!
EDIT!!! THis is such an old thread!! I thought it was a new one 
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it is uploaded some whr else?