My Latest.

Aaj phir apni taman’naoN ka haasil likha
Aaj phir maiNne tera naam musalsal likha

Mujh pe taqdeer ne har reham kiya hai laikin
bas mujhay teri muhabbat ke na qabil likha

raat bhar jaagte rehnta hoN taRapta kyoN hooN?
khud ko phir teri nigahoN ka hai ghayal likha

zeest jab doob na paayi to teri yaadoN ko
doobtay ko jo bachata hai, wo saahil likha

meri sansoN ki mehak phir hai baharoN ki tarha
Phir teri yaad ko har saans maiN shamil likha

Meray Ash’aar ne phir unka kiya waqt kharaab
mujh ko GupyoN ne, Gupistan Ka Paagal likha :smiley:
(Black Mamba)

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Wah Wah Wah

Aik Dam Jhakhas Bola BM

Bara Maza Aaya Tum Itna Kam Why Boltay Ho :bailan:

:eek:

BM Meri Abhi Abhi Nazrein Pari Hain Hum Dono Ki Ghari Aagay Peechay Hi Chal Rahi Hai :smiley:

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KyoNke Zyada bolnay walay logoN ko sab BeWaQooF kehtay haiN. :wink:

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Haan Woh To Theek Laikin Is Mein Moochon Ko Tao Denay Ki What Need Thi :hehe:

Nice :k:

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Nice work Black Mamba:k:…thanx for sharing with us:)

:k:

Beautiful

Chalain kuch to boriyat kum howi :yawn:

bhut khoob:k:

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Ye baat bhi, BeWaQoofoN ke samajhnay ki nahiN hai. :wink:

Thanks

Thanks alot for liking Amal.

Thanks Cap bhai.

:frowning: Lagta to aisay hai jaisay aur bhi baRh gayi ho boriyat aap ki.

Waisay Azad bhai, Kaisay haiN aap? :hug:

Thanks khooni bhai. :smiley:

Oye Mambay...

Yar.. Acha Bhala Shair hay tu... Bas koi Takhalus Soach aur Shadi karlay.. :D

Takhalus iss liye Zaroori hay ke.. uss kay baghir Koi.. Shair Tujhay LaRki naheeN dega... and.. Shair ke baghir tou koi Shair ko laRKi denay se raha ;)

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Black Mamba

Aaj phir apnay Azad qalm ko Qabil likha
Pehlay daikha Mamba ko phir naam Qatil likha

Yon to Mamba ne her jurm kiya hai laikin
muchain rakh kar 10 numberi ka Hasill likha

raat bhar jaagta rehta hay soottay ki talab main
Police aa kar lay gaii kayfiyat main ghayal likha

Hawalat kay shorbay main tayrta raha kuch roz
doobnay ko tha bach gia, Howaldar ne kaahil likha

ab sansoN ki mehak phir hai 'Jehazon' ki tarha
Dhowaan orra ke parros ki deewar ko saahil likha

Azad Ash'aar ne phir kiya Zoq ka satiyanass
Mamba ne dushmano main naam Shamil likha :D

Adab Arz

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Azad: *
Black Mamba

Aaj phir apnay Azad qalm ko Qabil likha
Pehlay daikha Mamba ko phir naam Qatil likha

Yon to Mamba ne her jurm kiya hai laikin
muchain rakh kar 10 numberi ka Hasill likha

raat bhar jaagta rehta hay soottay ki talab main
Police aa kar lay gaii kayfiyat main ghayal likha

Hawalat kay shorbay main tayrta raha kuch roz
doobnay ko tha bach gia, Howaldar ne kaahil likha

ab sansoN ki mehak phir hai 'Jehazon' ki tarha
Dhowaan orra ke parros ki deewar ko saahil likha

Azad Ash'aar ne phir kiya Zoq ka satiyanass
Mamba ne dushmano main naam Shamil likha :D

Adab Arz
[/QUOTE]

:D

Gr8 Done Azad Bhai..

mamba ko jo aap ne kahil likha
Bas meri sari umar ka hasil likha

:D

beautiful :k:

beautiful :k: thanx for sharing

aap ne tu jo bhi likha so likha
mien ne kabhi kuch aur kabhi kuch likha :wink:

:smiley:

:flower1:

Wah :k: :smiley:

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:smack:
Shaddi aur wo bhi Shair ki baiti se. yaar maiN ne tera kya begaRa hai.
Seriously yaar agar meri koi baat kabhi buri lagi ho, to aur bhi tareeqay haiN badla lainay ke. :crying:

:hehe:

Aap ne jo bhi likha, sach hai sarasar likha