My Latest GHAZAL after losing to Sri Lanka [must read]

I just wrote this ghazal. Enjoy. Please do not use it anywhere without my permission.
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Hoa toss to Younis nay kaha karengay ham BOWL
Jeetnay kay baad khayengay milkar MITHAY CHOWL

Tanvir bhaga aise jaise lagay kuttay uskay peechay
Afridi aur Ajmal aye aur score ho gya thora neechay

Sri Lanka ka 150 score to ayi aik umeed ki kiran
Par Pak team leti rahi bas ik run, ik run tay do run

BUTT apna BUTT lay kar aya BUT ho gya aikdum OUT
PIA kay jahaz mai beth kar jaye ga ye seedha SOUTH

Younis khelta raha FUN game apni par mara nahi chakka
ab to match harna tha lag gya muje yakeen PAKKA

END mai aya FAWAD , TANVIR and baaqi munnay BACHAY
UTAAR DO INKAY KAPRAY, BECH DO INKAY KACHAY

Haray SRI LANKA se, Ho gya SAPNAY hamaray sab KHAAQ
KIYONKAY TEAM MAI SHAAMIL nahi tha ABDUL RAZAAQ
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-Samad

Re: My Latest GHAZAL after losing to Sri Lanka [must read]

wah wah kya baat hay!

Re: My Latest GHAZAL after losing to Sri Lanka [must read]

:)

Re: My Latest GHAZAL after losing to Sri Lanka [must read]

:rotfl:

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Re: My Latest GHAZAL after losing to Sri Lanka [must read]

Ummed hay kay aaj agar pakistan match jeetay to ek achi si ghazal aap un kay aizaz mein likhain gay!

Very good Samad. Keep them coming..

Re: My Latest GHAZAL after losing to Sri Lanka [must read]

:omg:

:biggthumb

:rotfl:

Hahaah lolz.

nice keep it up +++

Re: My Latest GHAZAL after losing to Sri Lanka [must read]

good :hehe:

Re: My Latest GHAZAL after losing to Sri Lanka [must read]

LOL, That's really funny.

Re: My Latest GHAZAL after losing to Sri Lanka [must read]

LOL!!!!!!!!!!!

Yaar aik ghazal aaj ki jeet par bhi ho jaye. :)

Re: My Latest GHAZAL after losing to Sri Lanka [must read]

:omg: :omg: :omg:

This was absolutely BRILLIANT! Haha, thank you for the laugh!

Re: My Latest GHAZAL after losing to Sri Lanka [must read]

:D not bad!!!

although, technically it is not a ghazal :P

Re: My Latest GHAZAL after losing to Sri Lanka [must read]

more like sherz right :)

Re: My Latest GHAZAL after losing to Sri Lanka [must read]

:k:

Re: My Latest GHAZAL after losing to Sri Lanka [must read]

ek pakistan ki jeet par bhi ghazal ho jaye!

Good one

Did you write anything when the zinda qooms national sporting assets lost to its friendly neighbour?

Re: My Latest GHAZAL after losing to Sri Lanka [must read]

Thanks for liking everyone.

Much appreciated.

I always knew mere andar aik chuppa hoa ghaalib hai.

Re: My Latest GHAZAL after losing to Sri Lanka [must read]

Excellent poem, I read it but didnt comment and I read it again and it was worthy of a comment! so excellent! :k:

Re: My Latest GHAZAL after losing to Sri Lanka [must read]

it was awesome

very smart and nice :k: