My heart and me

Niksik · January 25, 2008, 12:54am

My heart and me
walked together today
gently moving
toward love’s way

My heart and me
sang together today
softly chanting
the troubles away

My heart and me
rested together today
silently dreaming
of that wonderful day

Written: Age 14.

Aliyish · January 25, 2008, 1:05am

Re: My heart and me

Enchanting Baji ji

**Poetry kay tumhi Ustad nahi ho TLK **
Suntay hain age 14 mere sister bi thee

fara · January 25, 2008, 1:47am

Re: My heart and me

** My heart and me
sang together today
softly chanting
the troubles away

**... bootiful!

TLK · January 25, 2008, 2:29am

Re: My heart and me

Beautiful ... wow ... what a talent

I love the second stanza

Niksik · January 25, 2008, 4:32am

Re: My heart and me

Thank you all.

hin33 · January 25, 2008, 5:40pm

Re: My heart and me

its soooo innocent ..

and pretty //

just like a 14 yr old.. :)

Niksik · January 25, 2008, 5:40pm

Re: My heart and me

Aww thank you Hinnie.

bheegiyaad · January 25, 2008, 6:16pm

Re: My heart and me

interesting n enjoyable

Niksik · January 25, 2008, 10:20pm

Re: My heart and me

^ Thanks.

Dushwari · January 26, 2008, 3:43am

Re: My heart and me

amazing poem, Niksik. very simple and very real. :)
all signs of a brave and honest mind.
thanks for sharing this here and please do write more.

best,
Dushwari