Re: my FIRSTEVER self designed she’r…what do you think?
nahiiN yaad to ‘dimaaGheen’ khaayeN yaa phir nihaar muNh baadaam 
oh thanks…ok, i’ll try to find out what coral or PS is first? 
iA.
**true! it’s said that if you wanna understand Urdu shaa’irii, you got to have a working knowledge of zabaan-e-Faarsii…knowing Faarsii tremendously help in Urdu shaa’iri as well as nasariyaati tasaaneef. arabii also helps quite a bit.
here is another example…can you tell the difference if this she’r is in Urdu or Faarsii?
hazaar jaama_darii, sad hazaar baKhiyaa_garii
tamaam shorish o tamkiiN nisaar-e-be_Khabarii****
by the way, it was in Faarsii…Maulana Rum kii is Ghazal kii tazmeen AsGhar GonDvii ne Urdu meN yuN farmaayii hai:
sukoon-e-shorish-e-pinhaaN hai shoGhl-e-jaama_darii
qaraar-e-seena-e-sozaaN hai naala-e-saHarii**