i had some free time this afternoon to kill to i started doodling with ‘paint’ and the end result is right here…what do you guyz think? is it worth saving or i should just delete from my files? an honest opinion plz! thankoo
Re: my FIRSTEVER self designed she’r…what do you think?
nahiiN yaad to ‘dimaaGheen’ khaayeN yaa phir nihaar muNh baadaam
oh thanks…ok, i’ll try to find out what coral or PS is first? iA.
**true! it’s said that if you wanna understand Urdu shaa’irii, you got to have a working knowledge of zabaan-e-Faarsii…knowing Faarsii tremendously help in Urdu shaa’iri as well as nasariyaati tasaaneef. arabii also helps quite a bit.
here is another example…can you tell the difference if this she’r is in Urdu or Faarsii?
hazaar jaama_darii, sad hazaar baKhiyaa_garii
tamaam shorish o tamkiiN nisaar-e-be_Khabarii****
by the way, it was in Faarsii…Maulana Rum kii is Ghazal kii tazmeen AsGhar GonDvii ne Urdu meN yuN farmaayii hai:
sukoon-e-shorish-e-pinhaaN hai shoGhl-e-jaama_darii
qaraar-e-seena-e-sozaaN hai naala-e-saHarii**
Re: my FIRSTEVER self designed she’r…what do you think?
hahaha…naazuk mizaajii kii aisii intihaa k rang bhii aankhoN meN khaTakte haiN…vaise, she’r to yaqeenan pasand aayaa hogaa na? Iqbaal kaa hai…soch ke NO kahnaa
Re: my FIRSTEVER self designed she'r...what do you think?
Iqbal is my fav ....
jhooti tareef se yaqeenan u ko khushi nai honi thi
chalo Theek hai...mujhe you ne **75%**** de diye mere art work pe :)...vo kaise? vo aise k art meN mujhe mile 0/25 aur she'r emN mujhe mile 75/75 = 75/100 :) thankoo :D**