my first sher

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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I heard this in radio houston

Wada kiya hi woh mere sapne me ayegi
wada kiya hi woh mere sapne me ayegi
khushi se mara mujhe neend nahi aayi :bummer:

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Re: my first sher

aisa aik meinney kahin parha tha sumthin like
wada tou kar gaey thay aaean gay khowab mein
ab khushi k maray neened na aaey tou kya karoon
(kuch aisa hi tha)

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Re: my first sher

yes you are correct, i couldn't put the words correct, if u get it some where please post it:)

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Re: my first sher

Wada Wo Ker Gaye Hain Ke Ayen Ge Khuab Main
Maray Khushi Ke Neend Na Aye To Kia Karain..

PS: Btw yeh Intikhab Main Hona Chaheay tha..

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Re: my first sher

She promised me
She'd visit me
in my dreams.

I'm so happy now
I can't sleep.
What do I do?

Forget her.
She isn't real.
She is a dream.