my first shair

ok this is my first that ive written by myself…now i know that im no faiz or allamma but i aint that bad either..anyhow here it is..lemme know what u guys think…

pata nahee kyun mein nay tum sey pyaar kya
tum itni duur gaye jitna mein kareeb aya
kya khoya pata nahee kya paya
tum aisi hou jaisey lahore ki dhoop mein darakht ka saya
mein ney kaafi dino sey kuch nahee khaya piya
sochta houn kab banoo ga tumhara piya
tum ney mera dil lay liya
yeh tum ney kya kiya
hum sey abb jaye naa jiya

Nice:flower2: :flower1:

Bohat khoob... Khush rahoo aur likhtay rahoo