******* My First Post *******

hello everybody. ye mera pehla din hai gupshup may. umeed kerta hoin k aap sab meray good friends sabit hoin gay.
now i am going to post my first poetry. hope u all like it.

aankho may lia chahat k phool
bato'n may lia lagawat k phool
mehboob k pass hi rehtay ha'n
jazbaat kabhi bhi lafzoo'n may
dhel ker zuba'n tak nahi aatay
dil may basi omango'n k rang
ubher ker nigah tak nahi aatay
ik khawaab saja k aankhon may
aankhein kholtay dertay hain
ab tak kuch loog is dunya may
chup chup k mohabbat kertay ha'n 

aankhon ki is narm zamee’n pay
aap hi aap ug jatay hain
jin ko Aanso kehtay hain

Welcome sagar. i hope u enjoy in gupshup as much as we all do. thats a nice poem.

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—~—Maria—~—
~Kiya haaq wo jeena hai jo apnay hi liyay ho
Khud mit kar kisi aur ko mitnay se bacha lay~

Welcome Sagar

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We all are good friends and for sure we’ll be ur good friends as well

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Ur first poem is very nice
Good start & kee psharing such good poetry with us.

Enjoy with ur friends @ gupshup

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Life is like a piano — what you get out of it,
Depends on how you play it.

Welcome Sagar. Nice poetic nick and a nice poem indeed.

[quote]
Originally posted by SaGar:
**hello everybody. ye mera pehla din hai gupshup may. umeed kerta hoin k aap sab meray good friends sabit hoin gay.
now i am going to post my first poetry. hope u all like it.

aankho may lia chahat k phool
bato'n may lia lagawat k phool
mehboob k pass hi rehtay ha'n
jazbaat kabhi bhi lafzoo'n may
dhel ker zuba'n tak nahi aatay
dil may basi omango'n k rang
ubher ker nigah tak nahi aatay
ik khawaab saja k aankhon may
aankhein kholtay dertay hain
ab tak kuch loog is dunya may
chup chup k mohabbat kertay ha'n 

**
[/quote]

welcome and nice post saGar...ap ki hulchal per parti rahti..welcome here too


~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

keep it up

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welcome here

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wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
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HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
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aankhon ki is narm zamee'n pay
aap hi aap ug jatay hain
jin ko Aanso kehtay hain

the piece of poetry is beutiful. keep it up man. bravo

You are most welcome. By the way, thanks for sharing the poetry

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