Re: My First Piece!
interesting!!!
A very good effort few years back 
BTW, what abt your ANY current PERWAAZ?
Since you wrote it while being hurt for some reasons … that’s y my remarks below should not be taken seriously… its just for fun
aik joke yaad aa gya hai… but cant narrate
kia zaroorat thi itni mehnat aur struggle kernay ki is zalim dunya mein.. 
No way
aik vote mera bhi
bohat dukh huwa ye jaan ker
hai ri ye qismat 
sun ko face kertay kertay skin colour black ho jai ga
exclude me off this world cuz at least I’m not cruel 