my first ghazal here, after the comeback....

[armughal]

since i am posting on GS again after a break, let me start posting my ghazals again…
although Jaan-Leewa is already posting my ghazals (copied from urdustan) every now and then…

anyway here is one…
i have its she’r in my signature…

**aik hee dali se kissi ko phool milay, kissi ko kaante
ajab hain ya rab teri is dunya me insaaf ke taqaaze

ya mujhay dunya se aazad kar ya dunya ko dil se aazad kar
aik dil hay bechara or us pe yeh sad atraaf ke taqaaze

utaar ab apne farishton ko apni masajid ko basane keliye
kahaan yeh bashar or kahaan ahl-e-iman ke ausaaf ke taqaaze

ajaz kabhi apne naam ke saamne doosra naam na lagaate
jo samajhte apni haqeeqat ko or nisbat-e-aslaaf ke taqaaze

khof-e-khuda nahin to aag kia, us ki raza nahin to jannat kia
hangaama-haye-saza-o-jaza nahin hain dil-e-shafaf ke taqaaze**

[Gadha]

Re: my first ghazal here, after the comeback…

*Originally posted by armughal: *

**utaar ab apne farishton ko apni masajid ko basane keliye
kahaan yeh bashar or kahaan ahl-e-iman ke ausaaf ke taqaaze
**

Masha ALLAH:) bhai! i see u are a big fan of Iqbal too:) keep posting:flower1:

[armughal]

i take too much of Iqbal's influence when i write....

some of my poetry can be easiy labelled as VERSION 2 of something iqbal has written....
sometimes i wonder if thats good or bad.... for me....

[Lamhay]

Well welcome back To poetry forum after a break
wonderful Ghazal Ar mughal thanks 4 sharing

[arifnawaz1]

Welcome Back :k::k::k:

[Amal]

Re: my first ghazal here, after the comeback…

*Originally posted by armughal: *

**aik hee dali se kissi ko phool milay, kissi ko kaante
ajab hain ya rab teri is dunya me insaaf ke taqaaze

ajaz kabhi apne naam ke saamne doosra naam na lagaate
jo samajhte apni haqeeqat ko or nisbat-e-aslaaf ke taqaaze

khof-e-khuda nahin to aag kia, us ki raza nahin to jannat kia
hangaama-haye-saza-o-jaza nahin hain dil-e-shafaf ke taqaaze**

Bohat khoobsoorat ghazal hey armughal … thanx for sharing with us & WELCOME:flower1:BACK:)

[hanie]

khof-e-khuda nahin to aag kia, us ki raza nahin to jannat kia
hangaama-haye-saza-o-jaza nahin hain dil-e-shafaf ke taqaaze

wah!
very nice piece of poetry!

[nikii]

bhut khooob mughal bhai :k:
welcome Back

[SunnyBoy]

Buhat Khoob :k:

[armughal]

thanx ppl....
for the welcome and the appreciation.... :)

[Rameesha]

Re: my first ghazal here, after the comeback…

*Originally posted by armughal: *

**ya mujhay dunya se aazad kar ya dunya ko dil se aazad kar
aik dil hay bechara or us pe yeh sad atraaf ke taqaaze

utaar ab apne farishton ko apni masajid ko basane keliye
kahaan yeh bashar or kahaan ahl-e-iman ke ausaaf ke taqaaze

ajaz kabhi apne naam ke saamne doosra naam na lagaate
jo samajhte apni haqeeqat ko or nisbat-e-aslaaf ke taqaaze

khof-e-khuda nahin to aag kia, us ki raza nahin to jannat kia
hangaama-haye-saza-o-jaza nahin hain dil-e-shafaf ke taqaaze**

buhat khoob :k:… thanks for sharing & welcome back

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

Re: my first ghazal here, after the comeback…

*Originally posted by armughal: *

**aik hee dali se kissi ko phool milay, kissi ko kaante
ajab hain ya rab teri is dunya me insaaf ke taqaaze

ya mujhay dunya se aazad kar ya dunya ko dil se aazad kar
aik dil hay bechara or us pe yeh sad atraaf ke taqaaze**

very niceeeeeeeeeeee:k::k:
welcome back:flower1:

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

welkom back:)