Re: My first ghazal "anjaany zakhm"
kuch wazan main garbar lagti hai n sanam khana-e-dil kuch jama nahi but anyways main tu itna bhi nahi likh sakti.u r doing gr8.practice makes a poet perfect.
i seriously feel i hav forgotten urdu.
Re: My first ghazal "anjaany zakhm"
mukarer.
if i may, i am adding here some
Adawatoon ka khoob natekh chala raha hey
Nigahoon mey jeb sey numee keye ansoon mileye
Khoodhi ka rukh morti hey taize hawa
Iss ko apney rastey mey jo kadooratoon keye bund mileye
‘Piyari’ chalo tum bhi bholo, mey tum seye khel chukka hoon
bhool chukka hoon mey, jeb sey hein nayeye khiloneye mileye
apney ehsasat sey iss ko manooniyet Kuda dey, amen
Kabhee wohh phir sey aa ker tow mileye
Aik taref ko dard-e-doori, doosri taraf ki dil-azaree
Aye Kuda, ger dono aik hoon, dua hey, dil-azaree hi ko doori mileye