Re: My first ghazal “anjaany zakhm”
Idher tu bari sharafat say baat ker ray hain… kal cafe main chachii ko narazz kernay ki khushi main itti phuljariyaaN kyo choar rahay thay… typical mashriqi merd…
Anyways as far as the poetry goes, I don’t have the correct knowledge of the frameworks for urdu poetry… ju dil main aata hay likh daiti hooN… aam sa, average sa…
Raye mangni hay tu Amal, Zamil ya Derwesh say Mangain… They know more about the technical stuff behind urdu poetry…