This was published years ago in my college’s magazine called “bazm”. This was when I was doing my Intermediate from GCCE Karachi. Good old days.
And I know I am forgetting a few shairs in this. I will update it if I remember the rest or if I find that magazine somewhere. So here it goes…
Hum yooN to sar-e-daar wafadar buhat the magar aaj phir furqat maiN dil azar buhat the
Ruswaayee tere bakht ke iNdraaj maiN thee darj Waqif tere ahwaal se kuch yaar buhat the
Is aalam-e-dunya maiN kahaiN aashna kise Rishte tamam khoon ke agyaar buhat the
AaNsooN zida chehre per tabassum kee thee namood Zalim kay muskurane ke atwaar buhat the
Hum yooN to buhat zood faramosh the Asif per lamha-e-rukhsat pe ashk baar buhat the
Re: My first gazal ever
Mashallah... Very Nice First Ghazal :)
Koyal
March 20, 2005, 2:59pm
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Re: My first gazal ever
nice gazal asif lagta hia kahin pahlay b parhi hia ap ki ye gazal :)
Amal
March 20, 2005, 9:16pm
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Doesn’t look like someone’s first piece ever. Shaed aap ka matlab hey GS par pehli ghazal. I am really impressed with your vocabulary. Aur style bhi zabardast hey:k: Thanx for sharing with us
Re: My first gazal ever
This is my own. I am yet to find the magazine bazm. I know I have it somewhere. When I do find it, I will scan it and post it here.
Re: My first gazal ever
You didn’t happen to graduate from GCCE Karachi back in 1992 , did you? If not, trust me, you have never read it before.
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Riyat-e-laffazi kay gorakh dhande hamaree puranee aadatoN maiN se aik hay.
Re: My first gazal ever
Asif2000:
Is aalam-e-dunya maiN kahaiN aashna kise Rishte tamam khoon ke agyaar buhat the
AaNsooN zida chehre per tabassum kee thee namood Zalim kay muskurane ke atwaar buhat the
Hum yooN to buhat zood faramosh the Asif per lamha-e-rukhsat pe ashk baar buhat the
wow something very different aur buhat khoobsurat andaaz-e-bayaan hay:-)
AQ
September 30, 2007, 6:51pm
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bahut kee aa'laa janaab :)
