Ok thought I’d try it…am rubbish at urdu so please be kind…
Here goes:
Mot nai choR diya, Zindagi nai maara hai
Nafrat nai kuch nahi kiya, Dil pyaar se haara hai
Re: MY FIRST ATTEMPT AT POETRY IN URDU!
welll done:)
Re: MY FIRST ATTEMPT AT POETRY IN URDU!
very nice effort ,, keep it up :)
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Aww thanks 
My urdu grammar is rubbish but I hope you got the jist of it… 
Re: MY FIRST ATTEMPT AT POETRY IN URDU!
kissi kaam ki sha’iry nahi 
…
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It's not for 'kaam' it's for fun! :)
Re: MY FIRST ATTEMPT AT POETRY IN URDU!
First attempt is always great. Never belittle it :)
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^ aww thanks Amal...a little encouragement goes a long way :)
Re: MY FIRST ATTEMPT AT POETRY IN URDU!
Very nice :k:
Re: MY FIRST ATTEMPT AT POETRY IN URDU!
your first attempt is sweet :-)
Re: MY FIRST ATTEMPT AT POETRY IN URDU!
Wah Wah kia baat hai.
Re: MY FIRST ATTEMPT AT POETRY IN URDU!
nice effort, keep it up:)
Re: MY FIRST ATTEMPT AT POETRY IN URDU!
nice shair
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Aww thanks for being so kind :)
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Excellent attempt keep it up n tell u one thing.....that wat eva u write is nt 4 other's....its basically 4 ur own self,cz wen u read it after some time....u feel improvement in ur thoughts n life better than dat wat u ve written.....so neva stop writting phoneix:)
Re: MY FIRST ATTEMPT AT POETRY IN URDU!
wow nice
Re: MY FIRST ATTEMPT AT POETRY IN URDU!
awwwwwwwaaaaawwwwwwaaaaaawwwwww…im rubbish at urdu poetry aswell 
…eng poetry is good for me
Re: MY FIRST ATTEMPT AT POETRY IN URDU!
Welldone:k:
U r better than me!