My courage

Niksik · February 4, 2008, 5:55pm

My courage lies still
like the water under the bridge
over the river
that flows beneath the rocks
that sit around the hill
with green pastures
that have a few weeds
which grow as the rain falls
from the sky above us all

The wind blows
My courage lies still.

Aliyish · February 4, 2008, 5:59pm

Re: My courage

But mine is shaky :hinna:

nice effort baji

Niksik · February 4, 2008, 6:03pm

Re: My courage

Your future is in your hands, my friend.
Blessings come from Allah, but courage is a decision.

TLK · February 4, 2008, 6:08pm

Re: My courage

Very beautiful Niksik, 'simple words and deep meaning ... I love it

Niksik · February 4, 2008, 6:09pm

Re: My courage

Thanks TLK.

Dushwari · February 5, 2008, 4:05am

Re: My courage

so very nice. Niksik. you have a gift of simplicity in writing. :)
amazing up lifting poem.
thanks for sharing.

best,
dushwari