my boat!

**so there is this pond at my uni. makes for great pics. so yesterday, after i got out of my class at 9, me and my frnd decided to sit by the pond on the benches and wait for our bus. and i decided to make a boat. you know, the paper boat. the only rough paper i could find in my state of excitment was this one with a corner of it ripped. but i didn’t care. i wanted to get that boat sailing as soon as possibly.

so i made that boat, and set it sailing. and it didn’t sink after 5 secs! i was afraid that it would get stuck in some part of the pond, because it is circular, and the water just goes round and round. but it didn’t. infact, it got like half way around the pond, when it started raining like CRAZY. and the bus was coming as well, so i couldn’t see what happened to the boat. but when i got to uni, there it was, in the middle of the pond, sunk.

then today, i made another one, this time with printer paper. and i also placed in it Paper Man. and this time again, it went half way around, when i spotted this like 3 year old, and he is yelling to his dad, “Daddy! A boat!” and he bent down and picked my boat and then placed it back again. and then came his brother, and they proceeded to sink it, by splashing water on. the poor thing, it never stood a chance. The dad just took the throughly wet, ripped in half boat and threw it in the thrash can. the first voyage with a man inside it.

Oh well. but it was soo cute to see the little boy get so excited to see a tiny paper boat sailing by. :smiley:
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magar mujha ko loTaa dau bachpun kaa saawan:crying:
woh kaaghaz kee kashtee :crying:
woh baarish kaa paani :crying:

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:crying:

but why the worry? you can still do that stuff. soaking in the rain. making paper boats, making kaghiz kay jahaaz!

i say defy the age limit and make that boat and sail it in the naalas made by baarish.

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I am too lazy right now to read all that :bummer:

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:rolleyes: then just read it in qistain. like some desi drama.

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I hope you do not mean Indian drama by desi for once they start, from writer to producer to director, no one has a freaking idea how to wrap them up in atleast 5 years. They get older as the audience get older.

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lol oh yea! i meant pakistani dramas. not the indian ones.

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why dont u narrate it to me? :blush: that will be more fun. :blush:

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:smack: uff i just did!

ok i’ll make a chart:

boat → sail → crazy rain → next day → bottom of pond
boat → with paper man → sail → little kids → daddy! boat! → splash water → goodbye to first man voyage.

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Ohhhh wow. what a great story. :hula:

u can make a career in writting scripts for Punjabi movies if u add song after and before every “—>”

:clap:

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oh yeaaa. idea bura to nahin hai. i have the whole script. though i think i’ll make it a bollywood movie. i might get nominated for an oscar :smiley: hmm…pondering if only i had a song writer. my lyrics suck.

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maiN hooN na. :blush: we can work together. So u can tell me anythin gin prose and I will convert it to lyrics :hula:

abhi hi try kar lo. :blush:

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i see i see. well, lesse. how about a theme song for the movie. ussi ko try martay hain.

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challo theek hai. but whats the theme? :expressionless: