My Best Friend

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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my best friend is my tears
as they never leave me alone

they remains in my eyes
when ever some body ignores me

when ever some body make me a joke
they comes in my eyes

as they never leave me alone
me best friend is my tears

when ever i feel my self in the shadow of sadness
they comes in my eyes

as they never leave me alone
me best friend is my tears…

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Re: My Best Friend

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*Originally posted by koiDost: *
my best friend is my tears

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Very good......
Keep it up...
Ata tu hay ap ko poetry karna......:)

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thanx jee

suker hai koi kuch bola tu sahi ...lakin janab shairi tu humain waqai nahin aati :( bas u heee dil main jo aata hai kah daitay hain :)..

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Re: thanx jee

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*Originally posted by koiDost: *
suker hai koi kuch bola tu sahi ...lakin janab shairi tu humain waqai nahin aati :( bas u heee dil main jo aata hai kah daitay hain :)..
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Good,
Jo dill main ay us ko likna hi shairi hoti hay na.....baas zara sa alfaz kko badal dia jata hay......
keep it up...u r doing good........

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Re: My Best Friend

beautiful:k::k:
keep it up:)

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thanx "ghazal kisi ke" and Swera jee :)

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Deep and touchy.... thanks for sharing and welcome to this world

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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
Deep and touchy.... thanks for sharing and welcome to this world
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Thanx DilSay