My best friend is a new poet, please tell is she a good one.

zindagi ke mausam mein
kabhi dhoop kabhi chhaon

kabhi barsey barish kabhi ho mausam khushk
kabhi miley koi khushi aur kabhi ho dukh

kabhi zeest ke safar mein miley
koi rah-e-bekhabar

kabhi koi chahey kisi ko na chah kar
kabhi bhool na paey ise bhool kar

ye zindagi bhi ajeeb khael he
koi jeete bazi haar kar,koi haare bazi jeet kar

do lamho_n key to zindagi hai
ek mein mitaao dukh aansoo baha kar
ek mein khila do koi kali muskuraa kar
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Originally posted by &Passionate:
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kabhi koi chahey kisi ko na chah kar
kabhi bhool na paey ise bhool kar

ye zindagi bhi ajeeb khael he
koi jeete bazi haar kar,koi haare bazi jeet kar

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Thats beautiful. Loved it.