my 3rd try :)

Ishq

ishq to intiha hay , ishq ki ibtida kahan
ishq ki hadein nahi , ishq ki akher kahan

ishq jado hay , han ishq hay rooh-e-rawan
ishq karo ga too payo gay janat ka saman

ishq nasha aesa kay saroor mittay kahan
ishq urayeh sakoon ab ishq mein nend kahan

ishq pana asan kahan , ishq mein shabistan kahan
ishq ha shikast-e-muqadir is jung mein jeet kahan

ishq mein sham bhojal aur raaton mein udasi ba-panah
ishq mein shab bekar ankh na lage to khuwab kahan

ishq moot ka kheel , han ishq dard ki daleel
ishq sitam-e-yar han ishq mein abb cheen kahan

ishq bay ghar karey , ishq mein thikana kahan
ishq tanha karey , han ishq mein zamana kahan

ishq ansooo dey , daman ashkon sa bhigona yahan
ishq intizar-e-yar ha aur ashiq ko issa faragat kahan

ishq zahar-e-qatil aur is mein sanson ki wafa kahan
ishq ha ik saza-e-umeri, Is mein umed-e-jaza kahan

ishq dard-e-dil dey , ishq sirf qarb ka hay saman
ishq gar ho yaktarfa , pir is mein masehaye kahan

ishq mein jo dob jaye , usay rok sake na koi hukmran
ishq mojzah-e-khuda ,tilism sa iska bach saka koi kahan

ishq mein gar jeet jayo to kuch payo gay kahan
ishq chenay sab kuch ismein mayar-e-insaf kahan

ishq kia jo mein nay farhan, uski ajab hay dastaan
sachey dastan-ishq mein nam aye,mere yeh majal kahan

ishq to intiha hay , ishq ki ibtida kahan
ishq ki hadein nahi , ishq ki akher kahan

i know there r lots of errors in it and there is always room for improvement
plz feel free to comment cause its only my 3rd try

regards
ra/en

Re: my 3rd try :)

Wah Wah.

Re: my 3rd try :)

Nice one Raven... bas... Ikk ChoooTa sa Mashwara...

Find Something about.... TAQTEE, and.. U will improve it more :)