jub yaad tumhaaree aatee hai
dil khoon key aansu roota hai
baydard yey zamaana kya jaaney
is pyar main kya kya hoota hai
ps:yey mainey naheen likha…just found it written on a peice of paper among some old papers…i must’ve read it somewhere & liked it..
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thx sara aap ne yeh share ki hamarai sath lekin yeh cheez intikhab main hoti hai soo plz post in intihkab ok bye
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**Woh Aye Intikhab Main Hamaray Hamari Qismat
Kabhi Hum Aap Kay Ashar Aur Kabhi Sunny Key Naseehat Daikhtay hain
anyway nice sharing sara …
yaar sunny yeh intikhab main to bhaija gia thread hay tum koun say Intikhab key baat kar rahay ho**
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nice one..
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Nice one :k:
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read nahi kia suna hoga yeh aik song k bol hain :) nice to read it n welcome in INTEKHAAB!
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welcome & hopin alot of more good 1ns frm u keep sharing
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aap plz batain ke yey kiss song ke wordings hain......& if possible can u post it.............:) **
**thnx.....
*sunny , sanaan , eemaan , prince ali , being lonely & sad_effect...........:D *
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gaana
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**
Choti Behna **
**and welcome to Poetry Section **
**Nice Choice **
**Thanks for sharing **
**and ab apa poetry mai post karti raha karien 
**
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U need to read other`s posts so that you get to know what quality of poetry should be posted :) because MODs here are tough :D
anyways Welcome!
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It does look like a gaana…Something from:
***Jab pyaar kisi sey hota hey…
ik dard sa dil meiN hota hey…
tum aek haseeN ho laakhoN meiN…
tumheiN paa ke bhala koi khota hey…
piya ho…
oh ho…hum to shuru hi ho gaey 
***
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*^^ bas aap ko muqa milay ke dair hoti hay :p *
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hey...innocent smile........thnx.............:D
amal...thnx to u too..........
& bholay..thnx ............
& yea...i know i should read others posts.....but i kinda find it hard to read roman urdu.........& other than tht most ppl here use tough urdu.....which i cant understand...........
khair...........thnx to all of u......for welcoming me here...........
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[FONT=Times New Roman]Imposed war
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[FONT=Times New Roman]“War is not the solution of any problem,
[FONT=Times New Roman]As it creates more complications.”
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[FONT=Times New Roman]“It kills many innocent lives,
[FONT=Times New Roman]This is not the way to fight for rights”.
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[FONT=Times New Roman]“Destroying other’s country, schools, homes of children,
[FONT=Times New Roman]You will motivate them for more destruction”.
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[FONT=Times New Roman]“See the past history; you will learn the lessons,
[FONT=Times New Roman]Problems and complications can be only solved by discussions”.
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[FONT=Times New Roman]“Calmly sit together and talk about the problem
[FONT=Times New Roman]Inshallah, you would soon have the good solution”
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[FONT=Times New Roman] By SYEDA RUKH-E-ZEHRA ABIDI
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^^ 
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Never Mind:halo:
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Thank you for sharing and welcome to Poetry section.
Dair aaye dorust aaye
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hijab-e zehra.........ur post is quite unredable......could u either edit it ...ya to post it again....& plz don't copy paste...........
saqi the angel....thnx for the welcome...........
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IMPOSED WAR
“War is not the solution of any problem, As it creates more complications.” “It kills many innocent lives, This is not the way to fight for rights”. “Destroying other’s country, schools, homes of children, You will motivate them for more destruction”. “See the past history; you will learn the lessons, Problems and complications can be only solved by discussions”. “Calmly sit together and talk about the problem Inshallah, you would soon have the good solution”
By SYEDA RUKH-E-ZEHRA ABIDI
A very nice poem with an equally nice meassage.
Regards.