my 1st shair

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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wo aay humary ghar khuda ki qudrat

** kabhi hum un kah gandy joty or kabhi apny ghar kah saf farash ko dety hain**

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Re: my 1st shair

lol...nice sayyma...

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Re: my 1st shair

hahahaha....great attempt !

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great starting, hats off :-) lolzzz