Mustaqil khwaab dekhta hoon mai

[LP]

Mustaqil Khuwab Dekhta Hoon Main
Terey Baray Main Soochta Hoon Main

Ek Nai Simmt Chal Para Hoon Main
Ek Naya Baab Khoolta Hoon Main

Koun Mushkil Main Saath Deta Hai
Apnay Dukh Aap Jheelta Hoon Main

Yonh Bhi Hota Hai Ab Ussay Mil Kar
Apnay Baray Main Poochta Hoon Main

Lout Aatti Hai Saath Tanhai
Jab Kabhi Ghar Ko Loutta Hoon Main

Sach Pay Qayyam Hoon Is Liey Mohsin
Zinda Lehjay Main Boolta Hoon Main

[Diva]

Re: Mustaqil khwaab dekhta hoon mai

[Nain]

Re: Mustaqil khwaab dekhta hoon mai

^smilie change hai lagta hai diva ney poetry pherhi hai ajj:cb:

Sach Pay Qayyam Hoon Is Liey Mohsin
Zinda Lehjay Main Boolta Hoon Main

wah

[ehsan]

Re: Mustaqil khwaab dekhta hoon mai

bauaht Aala.

[LP]

Re: Mustaqil khwaab dekhta hoon mai

[system]

Re: Mustaqil khwaab dekhta hoon mai

good one

[arain_munda]

Re: Mustaqil khwaab dekhta hoon mai

very good
Yonh Bhi Hota Hai Ab Ussay Mil Kar
Apnay Baray Main Poochta Hoon Main

[cutenice62]

Re: Mustaqil khwaab dekhta hoon mai

MAIN sadqay waaari

[Microbian]

Re: Mustaqil khwaab dekhta hoon mai

@cutenice62

MAIN sadqay waaari

aap ko ni achi lagi?

[cutenice62]

Re: Mustaqil khwaab dekhta hoon mai

@marinakhan

aap ko ni achi lagi?

haan kuch maza nahi aya…main nay baqi ghazal pay sochnay ka moka he nahi diya…

[LP]

Re: Mustaqil khwaab dekhta hoon mai

Khwab dekhna acha hota hai

[cutenice62]

Re: Mustaqil khwaab dekhta hoon mai

@Little Princess

Khwab dekhna acha hota hai

haan khuwab bunanana bhi bara dilkash lagta hai…

[LP]

Re: Mustaqil khwaab dekhta hoon mai

Yes :D