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KOI…
koi hai jo mairee zindagi main aagaya hai…
aur aaky mairee zindagi pay chhaa gaya hai,
koi hai jo mairee zaat ko qaabu main kar gaya,
koi hai keh jiske anay ka jaadu bikhar gaya,
kbhi raat ka nasha hai, kbhi shaam ka seher,
ab uske naam se her ik mansoob hai peher,
koi hai keh jiski yaad hr ik pal sata rahi,
ye yaad apne piyar ka hona jita rahi!!
koi hai jo bohat piyar mujhse kernay ab laga,
na saans ruk rahi hai, na hii qadam dagmaga!
masoom say chehra p shararat bhari hwi,
naam uske mre piyar ki ab har ghari hwi!
ankho ki gehraai keh utr na sakungi main,
aur gr utr gai to ubher na sakungi main,
ik roz uski baaton main aisi main kho gai,
wo pal tha jb ye tan, aur apna man dibo gai!
wo kehta raha mujhse anjanay main janay kia,
aur main ke janay us pal mujhay ho gaya tha kia?
dunya se hokay baykhabar, main usme jaa basi,
us dil ruba ki mairay jaan laiwa thi hansi..!!
honto p laga quful, aur dil main umang jgii……
kuch is trha se usme main khud ko magan lagi..
chupke se apne piyar ka izhaar kar diya,
us jaan nasheen ne mairay bhi, iqraar ker diya!
aya mujhay bohat phir uspe isliye bhi piyar!!
iqraar kerke phir se shuru hogai guftaar!
baybas thi bohat, kaash usko thaam leti main,
kuch istrha honto se uske jaam leti main!!
kuch main thi thora kaam main, kuch waqt mukhtasar,
halaat bhi aisay thy, thora karna tha sabar!!
“miljaen gay hamesha ko” kehke wida hoi,
pagal ye larki piyar main uske fida hoi!
njanay mujhko piyar ye, kab, kyun, kahan hua!
koi hai jo mairay aap main kuch yun rawan hua!
naraz us se hoti hun, ye maanti hun main,
udaas hojata hai, ye bhi jaanti hun main!
karke mujhay khafa, kabhi wo reh nahin sakta,
judaai mairi pal ko bhi wo seh nahin sakta!
koi hai jo mairay aap se rehta hai aashna,
njanay mujhse piyar kyun kerta hi baypanah!
usne hi sikhaya mujhe is piyar ka matlab,
by-wajHa hi jis me dharakne lagta hai qalab!
na-aashna thi pehle, aur ab aashna hui,
is ishq ke mafhoom se main baa khabar hui!
Meena k dil main aaj jo ik ghar kar gaya…
koi hai jo mairay aap main itna bikhar gaya!

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Good good. Is it yours?

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Very nice!! MashAllah!!

Waisay kon hay wo khush naseeb? :)

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no one yet :(

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ma imagination just-

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Meena lovely poem :)

Kaun hai woh shahzada? :D

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ma husband....who ever is he..

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^^ aha.....i hope u find him :)

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M still hoping............. :)

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Good hai…:slight_smile:
Sorry, I dont read poetry that much…lekin, why does it start happy and then dukh comes in…and no happy ending even..:teary1:

Umeed pe duniya Qyeem hay :)

dont feel bad agger itnay achy khyalaat hain to zaruur koi acha sa larka aap ko mil jaye ga :)

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:hayaa: itni bari poem parhnay kay lee-a dawatnama bheja tha. :smack:
I am not into shair o sha-a-ree so much. Sorry.

agar koi na mile to men hon na
i was just joking so dnt b excited, lol

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hehehe- adeeba you really seem to be much into poetries, where did you find dukh in end?? heheh, yes adeel, ummed p dunya qaem hay :) heheheh

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aray sabar ka phal meetha hota hay awais ji heheheh mujhay meetha phal chahye :D

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Wah Nice Attempt
Buhat khoob nazam ji
Meena u to chapar phar nikli:p

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hehe :) i have a huge collection ov ma own peotry as it can be published, but i dont want :)

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Too lengthy but beautiful creation Meena..

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you got tired ? hm? :(

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nice . . Good Effort :k:

Write in urdu script and then pas a scan copy . . .

Urdu Sha’i’ry ka maza Urdu rasmu-l-Khat main he hay