Mussam bhi tha Udass..........

Nazi83 · October 9, 2004, 5:50pm

system · October 9, 2004, 6:47pm

Beautiful and keep writing.:k:

show_sha · October 9, 2004, 7:20pm

Bahut achee soch hay aur ilfaaz ka intekhaab bhee accha hay, keep writing infcat dis reminds me some thing dat i wrote loooong ago:

MUSAM BHI TUMHAIN HEE YAAD KER RAHA HAY
SAWAN MERI ANKHON KAY SUNG BARAS RAHA HAY

Decent_Munda · October 9, 2004, 9:44pm

nice 1 nazi lagta nahin tumne likha hai :p
but bahut ache keep postin :)

Shikra · October 10, 2004, 12:27am

Good job :k:

_sami_rahman · October 10, 2004, 2:01am

mashallah! :k: keep it up! mein toh parh kar

shoaib_akhter · October 10, 2004, 3:19am

bohat achay :k:

Capricorn · October 10, 2004, 6:19pm

:k:

Minerva · October 10, 2004, 6:35pm

Nazi very nice. Thanks for sharing. :)

Show Sha, you should also share all that you wrote if you don't mind sharing with us.

HeArT_HaCKeR · October 10, 2004, 8:23pm

boht khoob :~)

ghazal_kisi_ke · October 11, 2004, 5:24am

veryyy nice .. :k: ..

DiYa · October 11, 2004, 8:02am

:k:

system · October 11, 2004, 8:47am

*humney tu sard ratuon mei bhi deep jalaye
jal jal key jinn mei bhujey kuch muhabat key Baab bhi …
*

beautiful :k::k:

keep it up

Nazi83 · October 12, 2004, 3:44pm

reading horse, DM, Shikra, Sami, shoby, capri, Minverva, HH, Ghazo, Diya, Vivo, thx all

Show shaw thx alot for ur contribution very nice why dont u post the entire poem .. would luv to read it …

nd thx all for taking out ur time !!

show_sha · October 14, 2004, 8:41pm

thnx naz....yeh aik hee sher hay poora nahi kia ab ta k :(