MUSALSAL...

ik karb ka samaan raha hai musalsal
jo kabhi dard ka darmeen bhi raha hai musalsal

main jaan kay bhi anjaan raha apne haal se
mujh se mere iss zarf ka imtehaan musalsal

kis haal se pucha mera haal us ne
mere haal pe jaise ehsaan musalsal

duniya se door dasht main la kharra kia
main ab talak iss bat pe hairaan musalsal

phir dil pe chott kha kay muskurate rehna
ikk jhoot ki hassi ka meezaan musalsal

ye soch kay lakhon sajde ada kiye
keh inn ki khott se bala emaan musalsal

kya soch ker ansoo bahai zoq-o-shoq se?
koi pather dil bhi pighla kia,armaan musalsal

phir dheere se sargoshi hui dil kay qareeb
koi ab bhi hai intezaar main,itminaan musalsal…

MashaAllah Shazia G aap key sha’ri mein buhat nikhaar aata jata raha hay :lajawab:
bus iss she’r ka dosra misra kuch smjh naheen aa raha hay kia aap iss ko biyaan kar sakti haiN ? mujhay iss mein tasalsul key kammi nazar aa rahi hay !

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:mash: Nice One !!!

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thanx 4 liking Sannaan & boredman.

next time i’ll write the summary at the end of every poem:cb:

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Matlay mein wazan ki kami hai :slight_smile: But its a nice try :k:

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thnx 4 likin Sid,i'll try 2 imrove inshallah.

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Good One Shazia..:k:

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thanx Aryaan.

Why not this time :naraz: .. anyway i read it again & again and now its clear :snooty:

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thnx God.

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keep saying thanks God :fraudia:

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ye soch kay lakhon sajde ada kiye
keh inn ki khott se bala emaan musalsal

:hmmm:

Zabardast keep it up :slight_smile:

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thanx Kami.