ik karb ka samaan raha hai musalsal
jo kabhi dard ka darmeen bhi raha hai musalsal
main jaan kay bhi anjaan raha apne haal se
mujh se mere iss zarf ka imtehaan musalsal
kis haal se pucha mera haal us ne
mere haal pe jaise ehsaan musalsal
duniya se door dasht main la kharra kia
main ab talak iss bat pe hairaan musalsal
phir dil pe chott kha kay muskurate rehna
ikk jhoot ki hassi ka meezaan musalsal
ye soch kay lakhon sajde ada kiye
keh inn ki khott se bala emaan musalsal
kya soch ker ansoo bahai zoq-o-shoq se?
koi pather dil bhi pighla kia,armaan musalsal
phir dheere se sargoshi hui dil kay qareeb
koi ab bhi hai intezaar main,itminaan musalsal…
Sannan
May 28, 2010, 12:47pm
2
MashaAllah Shazia G aap key sha’ri mein buhat nikhaar aata jata raha hay
bus iss she’r ka dosra misra kuch smjh naheen aa raha hay kia aap iss ko biyaan kar sakti haiN ? mujhay iss mein tasalsul key kammi nazar aa rahi hay !
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thanx 4 liking Sannaan & boredman.
next time i’ll write the summary at the end of every poem:cb:
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Matlay mein wazan ki kami hai But its a nice try :k:
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thnx 4 likin Sid,i'll try 2 imrove inshallah.
Sannan
May 31, 2010, 4:31am
10
Why not this time .. anyway i read it again & again and now its clear
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ye soch kay lakhon sajde ada kiye
keh inn ki khott se bala emaan musalsal
Zabardast keep it up