....Musafaten...

muskurah · January 24, 2011, 11:15am

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KKF · January 24, 2011, 11:36am

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**salaam,

bahot pyaarii Ghazal hai magar afsos k mukammil nahiiN hai aur paRh kar tashnaqii bar-qaraar rahii...shukria share karne ke liye.

bas ek amr kii taraf aapkii tavajjoh mabzool karaanaa maqsoood hai. matl'a ke misra-e-oolaa aur dusre she'r ke misra-e-saanii meN lafz-e-"raaaaah_guzar" [re, alif, he, gaaf, ze, re] nahiiN hai bal k lafz-e-"reh-guzar" [re, he, gaaf, ze, re] hai...ya'nii ba-alfaaz-e-digar ALIF besh hai. tasHeeH farmaa leN...shukria**

Amal · January 24, 2011, 1:17pm

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muskurah khoobsoorat ghazal hey aur acha design bhi. Hamarey saath share karne ke leeye shukriya :)

udaas · January 24, 2011, 2:48pm

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very nice

UZ · January 26, 2011, 4:28am

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Thanks for sharing nice :k:

Shab-e-Hijar · January 26, 2011, 9:20am

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very nice ghazal :k: