Munzil Kay Musafir ..................

Dr.Sahiba · March 29, 2003, 7:41pm

munzil kay musafir
munzil ka pata day mujh ko
hooti hay shooroh kahan sa
ikhtitaam hay is ka kahan per
rahi hoon mein bhi is benaam rastay ka
chal raha hoon,bhutuk raha hoon,thuk gaya hoon
dhoodta hoon apnay hum nashenoon ko
munzil ki talash mein rastay mein khoo gaya hoon
na maloom rastay ka mein musafir
apni pehchan ki talash mein chalay ja raha hoon
munzil kay musafir
munzil ka pata day mujh ko
janay hay kis turahan yah bata mujh ko
rekhta hoon kadam jahan per wahan say bhutuk raha hoon
bata ker meri benaam munzil ka naam
mujh per ehsaan ker day
munzil kay musafir
munzil ka pata day mujh ko

           BY Dr.Sahiba

Bhooli_Bisri · March 29, 2003, 7:47pm

javab nahe :k:

Dilsay · March 29, 2003, 7:58pm

Re: Munzil Kay Musafir ..................

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dr. Sahiba: *
munzil kay musafir
munzil ka pata day mujh ko
hooti hay shooroh kahan sa
ikhtitaam hay is ka kahan per
rahi hoon mein bhi is benaam rastay ka
chal raha hoon,bhutuk raha hoon,thuk gaya hoon
dhoodta hoon apnay hum nashenoon ko
munzil ki talash mein rastay mein khoo gaya hoon
na maloom rastay ka mein musafir
apni pehchan ki talash mein chalay ja raha hoon
munzil kay musafir
munzil ka pata day mujh ko
janay hay kis turahan yah bata mujh ko
rekhta hoon kadam jahan per wahan say bhutuk raha hoon
bata ker meri benaam munzil ka naam
mujh per ehsaan ker day
munzil kay musafir
munzil ka pata day mujh ko

           BY Dr.Sahiba

[/QUOTE]

bohat khoob..... so deep...

Philanthrope · March 29, 2003, 8:00pm

Touchy!

_Nazish · March 29, 2003, 8:36pm

zabardast!

Amarbail1 · March 29, 2003, 10:23pm

nice

ullujii · March 29, 2003, 10:39pm

Originally posted by Dr. Sahiba: *
munzil kay musafir
munzil ka pata day mujh ko
hooti hay shooroh kahan sa
ikhtitaam hay is ka kahan per
rahi hoon mein bhi is benaam rastay ka
chal* raha hoon,bhutuk raha hoon,thuk gaya hoon**
dhoodta hoon apnay hum nashenoon ko
munzil ki talash mein rastay mein khoo gaya hoon
na maloom rastay ka mein musafir
apni pehchan ki talash mein chalay ja raha hoon
munzil kay musafir
munzil ka pata day mujh ko
janay hay kis turahan yah bata mujh ko
rekhta hoon kadam jahan per wahan say bhutuk raha hoon
bata ker meri benaam munzil ka naam
mujh per ehsaan ker day
munzil kay musafir
munzil ka pata day mujh ko
           BY Dr.Sahiba 

DR ji ap larki ho ya larka
anywas its very nice.. thanks for sharying

Amarbail1 · March 29, 2003, 10:50pm

finally you have proved that you are ullo ji
see her nick… its Dr.Sahiba

ullujii · March 29, 2003, 11:40pm

Amarbail jii dil tu karta hai k apna nick ap co day don… lakin ya mera fave nick hai is lieya nahin day sakta..
ap zara ghoor farmaoo tu pata lag jay ga k main ne zaroor kis bat par deya hai ager phir be samaj na ay tu

ameen · March 30, 2003, 1:48am

nice

yeah loag to manzil ki baat kertay hain
musafroan kay liyae rasta he kafe hay

Man_de_Mouj · March 30, 2003, 5:13pm

Re: Munzil Kay Musafir ..................

very nice Dr Sahiba...keep writing

HeArT_HaCKeR · March 30, 2003, 5:54pm

Nice one :)

Dr.Sahiba · March 30, 2003, 7:47pm

Thnaks all of u .

superglue · March 30, 2003, 11:10pm

chal raha hoon,bhutuk raha hoon,thuk gaya hoon
dhoodta hoon apnay hum nashenoon ko

Dr shaieba nay Dr shahib ki ghazal post ki hai shaied

Azad · March 31, 2003, 8:27am

jab itnay dhair saray log aik saat keh rahay hain ..keh bohut khoob .... to koi shaq ki gunjayish nahi reh jati .. aap kay khoob honay main.

p.s.
aap log Doc ko daikh kar khoob keh rahay ho???

Dr.Sahiba · March 31, 2003, 12:27pm

mera khiyaal hay kay mein agur shari kerti hoon to mein na is gazul mein mera lehaaz sa is mein dr sahib zaida fit hain.thanks 4 all of u compliments.