Muntazir aankhein

Capricorn · November 15, 2003, 8:10pm

Ik umr’ ke intizaar ke baad,
wo jab mujh se milne aayee bhee to,
bicharne ke liye…
us ko alwida karte,

mein ne khamoshi ke wrapper mein,
apnee muntazir aankhein,
nafasat se pack kar ke,
us ko gift kar dee theen…

Capricorn

maheen_sajid · November 15, 2003, 8:26pm

yeh batain usnay packet khola kab?

chand_chehra · November 15, 2003, 9:46pm

LOL
ankhain pack kardien to ap ab dekhtay kasay ho

system · November 15, 2003, 10:14pm

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PS: :k:

cuteepie · November 16, 2003, 1:14am

:)

Azad · November 16, 2003, 8:57pm

humm

Capricorn · November 17, 2003, 8:38pm

Thanks everyone :k:

Koyal · November 18, 2003, 2:44am

isi leay tu 1 ki 4 nazar ati

PS: nice one capri

Capricorn · November 18, 2003, 10:04am

Thanks Koyal :k:
PS:- No comments

Philanthrope · November 18, 2003, 4:07pm

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Bohat khoob :k:

Capricorn · November 18, 2003, 6:31pm

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Thanks :k:

_Masoom_Muskaan · November 20, 2003, 9:44am

ap beh poet ho

boht heeeeeeeeee nice :k:

Capricorn · November 20, 2003, 10:38am

Thanks MM:) Welcome back to GS :k:

jasmeen · December 4, 2003, 9:45am

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Capricorn: *
Ik umr’ ke intizaar ke baad,
wo jab mujh se milne aayee bhee to,
bicharne ke liye....
us ko alwida karte,

mein ne khamoshi ke wrapper mein,
apnee muntazir aankhein,
nafasat se pack kar ke,
us ko gift kar dee theen....

Capricorn
[/QUOTE]
app kis gift shop main beth kay ankhyn, gurdy, phaphry atia kerty hein......:D

Capricorn · December 4, 2003, 4:19pm

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by jasmeen: *
app kis gift shop main beth kay ankhyn, gurdy, phaphry atia kerty hein......:D
[/QUOTE]

Husn ke hairat-kadde mein...aap aayega aankh aap ko bhee maar deinge ;)

jasmeen · December 5, 2003, 4:08pm

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hum hein bary dil waly jawabun hum bhee kuch na kuch maar dein gay kuch example yah hein:bailan::kaboom:

Capricorn · December 5, 2003, 7:31pm

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Mein ghalat to naheen kahta tha ke tum MQM kee ghundee ho

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 5, 2003, 11:11pm

eekzzzzz u and writing potry*eekz*

keep it up...:-)

Dania · December 5, 2003, 11:27pm

superb!:k:

jasmeen · December 6, 2003, 5:05pm

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