~MuNafiQ ~

nikii · January 10, 2003, 1:49pm

**Kaha us nay kay Shaakhon say

juda phooloN ko karnaY ki ,

Hawaoon kI jo Sazish ha ,usaY achII nahi lagtI

Faqt iK PaL Ko Ji chaaha

isay itna tu kah don aj ,

MuhabbaT PhooL kI iN pattiun say barh kay nazuk thI

JisaY qadmon talay us nay ,

Kabhi Ka roondh daLa ha **

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · January 10, 2003, 2:21pm

Beautiful, Thanks for sharing nikii :)

Capricorn · January 10, 2003, 2:42pm

:k:

Amal · January 10, 2003, 5:14pm

nikii bohat piyaari nazm hey:k:…thanx…lekin lower aur uppercase ka ye combination

chand_chehra · January 10, 2003, 5:47pm

nikiiiiiiii :k:

nikii · January 10, 2003, 6:49pm

thxs amal ji
kiun combination achaa nahi ha kyaa:( tu mein ainda nahi karon gi asayyy

thxs chando , capricorn n gul

arifnawaz1 · January 10, 2003, 6:55pm

Bahut khoob :k::k::k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 10, 2003, 7:30pm

wowww!!! beautiful:k::k:
thanks for sharing:)

Rameesha · January 10, 2003, 10:07pm

nazm buhat khoob he :k: nikii siso ..per parhney mein dushwari hoyi

nikii · January 10, 2003, 11:22pm

sorry na
mein nay edit kia abhi sab ko itni dhshwarii hue
thxs ramesha ji ,arif n ghazal

aadhoorighazal · January 10, 2003, 11:48pm

nikii, bohat khoobsurat hai yeh nazam. thanks.

~~~MuNafiQ ~~~