Mukhlis Larki

Us nai kaha
“Sunau
Tum aik achi aur Mukhlis larki hau
Lekin
Khudara
Kabhi apnay aap say bhi Mukhils hau jaya karau”

Aur
Main nay ussay chaur dya hay
:slight_smile:

hmmm....

is mein yeh nahin deikhtey keh faida kis ka ziyada hua hey. wat shud b sought after is , who lost less !!!
anywayz a very nice and genuine attempt :)

Re: Mukhlis Larki

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Simply Seema: *

Us nai kaha
"Sunau
Tum aik achi aur Mukhlis larki hau
Lekin
Khudara
Kabhi apnay aap say bhi Mukhils hau jaya karau"

Aur
Main nay ussay chaur dya hay
:)

[/QUOTE]

Khud say itni mukhlasi behi achi nahi...

Jis nay mashwara diya wo he janay...

Re: Mukhlis Larki

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Simply Seema: *

Us nai kaha
"Sunau
Tum aik achi aur Mukhlis larki hau
Lekin
Khudara
Kabhi apnay aap say bhi Mukhils hau jaya karau"

Aur
Main nay ussay chaur dya hay
:)

[/QUOTE]

Us ne itnee baree ghalatee kar dee, uff, ab pachtata hoga bechara!

:eek:

:konfused:

nice and very touche:k::k:
thanks

Re: Mukhlis Larki

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Simply Seema: *

Us nai kaha
"Sunau
Tum aik achi aur Mukhlis larki hau
Lekin
Khudara
Kabhi apnay aap say bhi Mukhils hau jaya karau"

Aur
Main nay ussay chaur dya hay
:)

[/QUOTE]
So Touchy!...An excellent piece of poetry no doubt!
Thanks a lot for sharing na ...