~* Mukammal Nazm *~

Philanthrope · March 16, 2003, 11:23am

Nazm uljhi hue hai seenay main Shair attkay hue hain hoonton main Lafz kaghaz pe bethtay hi nahi Urtay phirtay hain titliyon ki tarhan Kab se betha hua hon main janam Saada kaghaz pe likh kay naam taira Bus taira naam hi mukammal hai Is se behtar bhi nazm kia hogi!

Dilsay · March 16, 2003, 11:26am

Very nice... thanks for sharing...

Capricorn · March 16, 2003, 12:18pm

Re: ~* Mukammal Nazm *~

Lajawab :k:
Its quite romantic Pharma

Dania · March 16, 2003, 12:31pm

wah zabardast :k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · March 16, 2003, 2:19pm

Buhat khuub,Thanks for sharing pharma.

Amal · March 16, 2003, 2:51pm

Khoobsoorat nazm hey:k:…thanx for sharing with us.

BrokenSky · March 16, 2003, 3:01pm

:k:
thnx for sharing:flower1:
:)…

HuMzAaD · March 16, 2003, 3:47pm

Re: ~* Mukammal Nazm *~

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by P}{ä®mä©Ï§t: *

Nazm uljhi hue hai seenay main
Shair attkay hue hain hoonton main
Lafz kaghaz pe bethtay hi nahi
Urtay phirtay hain titliyon ki tarhan
Kab se betha hua hon main janam
Saada kaghaz pe likh kay naam taira
Bus taira naam hi mukammal hai
Is se behtar bhi nazm kia hogi!

[/QUOTE]

wah

Philanthrope · March 16, 2003, 5:04pm

Re: Re: ~* Mukammal Nazm *~

Yep …no doubt..
Thanks Dilsay, Capricorn, Dania, GuL-e-Tasbeeh, Amal, BrokenSky, HuMzAaD for liking …

Man_de_Mouj · March 16, 2003, 6:25pm

what a piece...so lovely....aap kay anay ka maloom ho jata hay....lolzzz

system · March 16, 2003, 7:58pm

beautiful :k::k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 17, 2003, 1:23am

wah bohtu khoob:k::k:

ullujii · March 17, 2003, 1:25am

very nice :k:

Mirza_Ruswa · March 17, 2003, 6:24am

Re: ~* Mukammal Nazm *~

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by P}{ä®mä©Ï§t: *

Nazm uljhi hue hai seenay main
Shair attkay hue hain hoonton main
Lafz kaghaz pe bethtay hi nahi
Urtay phirtay hain titliyon ki tarhan
Kab se betha hua hon main janam
Saada kaghaz pe likh kay naam taira
Bus taira naam hi mukammal hai
Is se behtar bhi nazm kia hogi!

[/QUOTE]

waah waah

kiyaa behtareen takhayyul hai

Bus taira naam hi mukammal hai
Is se behtar bhi nazm kia hogi!

itni mukammal nazm , Thanx for sharing

Mirza ruswa

TajMahal · March 17, 2003, 6:29am

Very touchy ....

Darey kion mera qatil? kia rahe ga oski garden pur
wo khoon jo chashme tur se, dum badum nikla

Nikelna khoold se Adem ka soonte aye hain lekin
bohet be-abroo ho ke terey kooche se hum nikle....

Philanthrope · March 17, 2003, 6:30am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Man de Mouj: *
what a piece...so lovely....aap kay anay ka maloom ho jata hay....lolzzz
[/QUOTE]
lolz.. Shukriya..

Thanks *** Vivacious *** , ghazal kisi ke & ullujii for Liking this...

Philanthrope · March 17, 2003, 6:32am

Re: Re: ~* Mukammal Nazm *~

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Mirza Ruswa: *

waah waah

kiyaa behtareen takhayyul hai

Bus taira naam hi mukammal hai
Is se behtar bhi nazm kia hogi!

itni mukammal nazm , Thanx for sharing

Mirza ruswa
[/QUOTE]
Pasandeedgi ka bohat bohat Shukriya...

Thanks TajMahal... Thats lovely!

Paglee · March 17, 2003, 2:22pm

Re: ~* Mukammal Nazm *~

Nazm uljhi hue hai seenay main
Shair attkay hue hain hoonton main
Lafz kaghaz pe bethtay hi nahi
Urtay phirtay hain titliyon ki tarhan
Kab se betha hua hon main janam
Saada kaghaz pe likh kay naam taira
Bus taira naam hi mukammal hai
Is se behtar bhi nazm kia hogi!

[/QUOTE]

bohat khoobsurat nazam hia pharma thanks for shring

Philanthrope · March 18, 2003, 3:17pm

Re: Re: ~* Mukammal Nazm *~

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Paglee: *

bohat khoobsurat nazam hia pharma thanks for shring
[/QUOTE]
Thanks for liking Paglee ...