mujhy wo laakh tarpaa'ey magar us shakhs ki khatir

Koyal · June 4, 2008, 4:24am

***meray khuwa’bon k gulshaN maiN Khiza’yeN raqs karti heiN
mere hontoN ki larzish main wafa’yeiN raqs karti heiN

mujhy wo laakh tarpaa’ey magar us shakhs ki khatir***
***mere Dil k andheroN maiN Dua’yeiN raqs karti heiN.

usy kehna k lot aa’ey sulagti shaam se pehlay
kisi ki khushk aankhooN maiN sadaa’yeiN raqs karti heiN

Khuda jaany ye kesi kashish hai teri yadooN meiN
main tera zikir chey’rooN tu hawa’yeiN raqs karti heiN***

Shab-e-Hijar · June 4, 2008, 5:55am

[quote] mujhy wo laakh tarpaa'ey magar us shakhs ki khatir mere Dil k andheroN maiN Dua'yeiN raqs karti heiN. [/quote]
Beautiful :k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · June 4, 2008, 7:23am

Buhat khoob Koyal kahaan sey laati :aq:

ATA · June 4, 2008, 9:51am

My goodness, classic stuff really, what an amazing descriptions of emotions lips, heart, eyes, face... marvelous really... thanks **Koyal **:) you gotta imagine whole poem while reading really wonderful :)

Precious_Khan · June 4, 2008, 12:04pm

Re: mujhy wo laakh tarpaa’ey magar us shakhs ki khatir

Yeh In Sab Cheezoon Nay Alag Alg RAQS Kahaa’n Say Seekha

Zabardast Sharing Koko :~)

muncho · June 4, 2008, 2:49pm

Re: mujhy wo laakh tarpaa'ey magar us shakhs ki khatir

usy kehna k lot aa'ey sulagti shaam se pehlay
kisi ki khushk aankhooN maiN sadaa'yeiN raqs karti heiN

bahut achay

Koyal · June 5, 2008, 3:43am

jidhar raat ho beth jati tu mil jata thanks

Koyal · June 5, 2008, 3:43am

thanks ATA ap kahaN chupay huwey they inay dino se :)

Shumaisa · June 5, 2008, 5:48am

Re: mujhy wo laakh tarpaa’ey magar us shakhs ki khatir

Very Nice Koyal.. :k:

redidentity · June 5, 2008, 5:59am

Re: mujhy wo laakh tarpaa'ey magar us shakhs ki khatir

buhat khoob..

ATA · June 5, 2008, 8:36am

bass yaheen ... waheen ... kaheen ...

kabhi kabhi chupna bhi shat k liay acha hotahay :p

NaMaan · June 5, 2008, 8:40am

Re: mujhy wo laakh tarpaa’ey magar us shakhs ki khatir

Very nice

abeeha · June 5, 2008, 9:24am

awesome sharing koyal:)

Koyal · June 6, 2008, 3:28am

thanks abeeha ;)

Koyal · June 6, 2008, 3:32am

thanks nauman

ruswa · June 6, 2008, 7:03am

Re: mujhy wo laakh tarpaa'ey magar us shakhs ki khatir

Ahaan ... Very aCha Koyal :)

Sheal · June 6, 2008, 8:05am

Re: mujhy wo laakh tarpaa’ey magar us shakhs ki khatir

awesome sharing koyal :k:

Ali_jee · June 6, 2008, 9:25am

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very nice ...................jee

WiseGuy · June 6, 2008, 7:39pm

Re: mujhy wo laakh tarpaa’ey magar us shakhs ki khatir

bohat kh00b :k:

_Masoom_Muskaan · June 6, 2008, 8:27pm

wo poem ke bat kering u ka food nehe jaha betho mel jai