~* Mujhey Tum Yaad Aatey Ho *~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Mujhey tum yaad aatey ho
Kisi sunsaan sapney meiN chup hui khawahish ki hiddat meiN
Kisi masroofiyat key moRr par
Tanhayi key sehraoN meiN
Ya phir kisi anjaan bemaari ki shiddat meiN
Mujhey tum yaad aatey ho

Kisi bichrey hue chashm-e-purnam key nazarey par
Kisi beetey hue din ki thakan ki auT sey
Ya phir tumharey zikr meiN guzri hui shab key ishaarey par
Kisi basti ki ba-ronak saRak par
Aur kisi daryaa, kisi weeraaN jungley key kinaarey par
Mujhey tum yaad aatey ho

*Meri chup key koeiN meiN *
ArzuoN key badan jab tairtey haiN
Aur kinaarey sey koi boley
Tu lagta hai ajal awaaz deti hai
Meri bey-chainiyoN meiN jab tumhari tund-khu ranjhish khaTakti hai
Tumhari bey-sabab doori sulagti hai
Ya phir jab bhi meri aankhoN key sehra meiN
Tumhari yaad ki tasveer jalti hai
Judayi haath malti hai
Mujhey tum yaad aatey ho
Mujhey tum yaad aatey ho

*Muqaddar key sitaaroN par *
ZamanoN key ishaaroN par
Udaasi key kinaaroN par
Kabhi weeraaN shehroN meiN
Kabhi sunsaan raastoN par
Kabhi hairaaN aankhoN meiN
Kabhi bey-jaan lamhoN par
Mujhey tum yaad aatey ho

Suhaani shaam ho koi
KahiN badnaam ho koi
Bhaley gulfaam ho koi
Kisi key naam ho koi
Mujhey tum yaad aatey ho

KahiN baarish baras jaye
Kahin sehra taras jaye
KahiN kaali ghaTa utrey
***Kahin baad-e-saba thehrey ***
Tumharey aur merey darmeyaaN aa kar Khudah thehrey
***to meri zindagi key awaal-o-aakhir ***
***Tum us lamhey ***
Khudah key baad aatey ho
Mujhey tum yaad aatey ho

I miss you! :frowning:

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**Bohut Khoob…Thanks 4 Sharing jee.:flower2: **

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mujhe tum yaad aatay ho :frowning:
Wow…beautiful poem KN… mere pas ye poorii poem hai but “tukron” mien :smiley: (adhi aik jaga note ki hoee hai adhii dosrii jaga)… thanks for sharin’ .. :slight_smile: :flower1:

by the way do u know who’s the poet?

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Thank you so much for liking Samavia & Heart :hug:

Merey paas bhi pehley yeh sirf TukRoN meiN hi thi… aur pata bhi nahiN tha key sab mila key ek poem banti hai :smiley: Someone sent this to me recently… don’t know who the poet is though.. :bummer: Will ask the one who sent me :smiley:

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hehe.. nahi mujhe maloom tha k ye aik he poem hai but kabhi aik jaga ikhatii kerne ki koshish nahi ki coz tarteeb maloom nahi thee na :D… waise naam zaroor pochna.. yaad se.. :slight_smile: (waise i think kissi ‘jane pehchane’ poet ki hai :konfused: )

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my goodness..:-O

I wrote a poem few days back on someone's request and it uses the same line "MujhaY tum yaad aataY ho" :S

and it has the same idea..... :-O :-O :-O

I never read this one before and it is so similar to it :-S

I did not share it here.. it's in my journal :-/

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Nice1:)

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VERY nice … Good Selection :flower2:

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KahiN baarish baras jaye
Kahin sehra taras jaye
KahiN kaali ghaTa utrey
Kahin baad-e-saba thehrey
Tumharey aur merey darmeyaaN aa kar Khudah thehrey
to meri zindagi key awaal-o-aakhir
Tum us lamhey
Khudah key baad aatey ho
Mujhey tum yaad aatey ho

Wah .. maza agia

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Thank you for liking muddii, GS bhai and Azad ji :slight_smile:

HH: Poet ka naam ussey bhi nahiN pata tha… :bummer: Maybe someone here knows… if anyone knows… please tell us :help:

**AQ: **I read your poem… and really once again you did a great job. Lekin I don’t think it’s too similar to this one… Except the same theme line/topic… I have read few others poems as well with the same line, but I guess the magic lies in the choice of words and the style of writing a poem. Your style is different than this one, but yet… very nice ! :slight_smile:

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i miss you too :-p

two thums wayyyyyyyy upppppppp for the poem sigh :frowning: :frowning: :frowning: :frowning:

thanx for sharing :flower1: so ap nay naam pocha poet ka ?

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awww…chalo koii nahi :bummer: waise i dun think yahan per kissi ko pata hai poet ka naam.. :o

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sigh :(

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bohat nice :k:

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ghazal: I miss you more :snooty: Yeah.. i did ask, lekin nahiN pata tha :frowning: Thanks for liking though :slight_smile:

HH: To phir kahaN sey pata karwayeiN? :frowning:

shoaib: Thanks :slight_smile:

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beautiful :-)

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Thank you Maheen :-)

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beautiful :k::k::k:

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Simply stunning. :flower1:

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Thank you Viv and Capri :-)