Mujhey Ik Nazam Kehni Hai...

mein pehli baar yahan apni koe nazam share kerney ja raha hon. hope u guyz will like it :slight_smile: the title is “Mujhey Ik Nazam Kehni Hai”

Mujhey ik nazam kehni hai
Khiza’n k mausam mein jhartey hoa un zard pat’ton pay
wo un ki sard aahon pay
Mujhey ik nazam kehni hai

Andheri raat mein rasta dikhatey chaand taaron pay
wo apney raaz daaron pay
Mujhey ik nazam kehni hai

Muhabbat k safar mein rah miltey khaardaaron pay
wo un jhotey saharon pay
Mujhey ik nazam kehni hai

Laraztey honton say nikley hoa masoom lafzon pay
wo kuch gumnaam lamhon pay
Mujhey ik nazam kehni hai

Mera wo chor aankhon say tujhey hi taktey rehney pay
wo chori pakrey janey pay
Mujhey ik nazam kehni hai

Sunehri zulf k saaye mein chupti kaali aankhon pay
wo apni rukti saanson pay
Mujhey ik nazam kehni hai

Chaman k lala zaaron c mehekti zindagani pay
haan apni prem kahani pay
Mujhey ik nazam kehni hai
Mujhey in nazam kehni hai…!

Re: Mujhey Ik Nazam Kehni Hai…

nazam tu app kah chukay…aur wo bhi nihayat purasar…aur lateef andaaz mein:k:
bohat khobsorat kalaam:)

Re: Mujhey Ik Nazam Kehni Hai...

Very Nice :)

Re: Mujhey Ik Nazam Kehni Hai…

Mahee bohat khoobsoorat nazm kahi hey aap ney :k: Thanx for sharing it with us :slight_smile:

Re: Mujhey Ik Nazam Kehni Hai...

kya baat hai..................bohat khoob....keep it up.........

Re: Mujhey Ik Nazam Kehni Hai...

Beautiful thought... except the last few lines.... that broke the spell. Good effort anyway... keep it up.

Re: Mujhey Ik Nazam Kehni Hai...

Nice Poem Mahee, aapki pehli nazm pasand aai, umeed hey aap aur bhi share kareiN ge:-)

Re: Mujhey Ik Nazam Kehni Hai...

thanks everyone :)

Re: Mujhey Ik Nazam Kehni Hai...

Sunehri zulf k saaye mein chupti kaali aankhon pay
wo apni rukti saanson pay
Mujhey ik nazam kehni hai