~Mujhey ghum woh dey raha hay magar iss pe chahta hay~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

system June 19, 2005, 1:11pm 1

* MilaiN hum kabhi tou aisey keh hijaab bhool jaaye MieN sawaal bhool jaaoN, woh jawaab bhool jaaye

Woh kisi khayal maiN ho aur ussi khayal maiN hi
Kabhi merey raastey maiN woh gulaab bhool jaaye

Jo kabhi tu paRhney bethey, mujhey harf harf dekhey
Teri aankheiN bheeg jaaieN, tu kitaab bhool jaaye

Teri sooch per ho haavi meri yaad iss tarha se
Keh tu apni zindigi ka nisaab bhool jaaye

Woh jo dekhey meri jaanib tou bachooN aik gunaah se
Usse dekh looN meiN itna keh sharaab bhool jaaye

Mujhey ghum woh dey raha hay magar iss pe chahta hay
Mein hisaab na rakh paaoN, woh hisaab bhool jaaye
*

Aryaan June 19, 2005, 2:58pm 2

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Bohat khoob **Vivacious ** ..:k:

HeArT_HaCKeR June 19, 2005, 5:15pm 3

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Beautiful!

naved_ltf June 19, 2005, 5:27pm 4

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wow, we hav a poetess in our midst!...good job :) (...although i had to brush up again on urdu to understand it)

system June 19, 2005, 9:33pm 5

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Aryaan & HH thanks

*naved_ltf * ye ghazal mein ne nahin likhi hay.. thanks for liking though.. :-)

muddii June 20, 2005, 3:37am 6

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Simply splended choice....:)

Golden_Scorpion_1 June 20, 2005, 4:15am 7

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Zabardast... Very Nice... Tnx VIVO :)

system June 20, 2005, 9:02am 8

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Thanks for liking muddii & GS

GuL-e-Tasbeeh June 20, 2005, 10:54am 9

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Nice:-)

system June 20, 2005, 9:29pm 10

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^ thanks Gul :-)

ghazal_kisi_ke June 21, 2005, 3:49am 11

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nice1 =)

system June 21, 2005, 10:31am 12

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thanks ghazalo :-)

Maheen2002 June 21, 2005, 12:02pm 13

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Zabardast .. going straight to my poetry collection :k: :love:

system June 21, 2005, 12:39pm 14

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^ thanks maheen :)

Rameesha June 21, 2005, 6:46pm 15

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nice Vivacious:k:

system June 21, 2005, 8:45pm 16

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^ thankoo :)

Koyal June 21, 2005, 9:28pm 17

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:k: nice one vivo..

system June 21, 2005, 9:38pm 18

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^ thanks :-)

reet June 23, 2005, 12:08pm 19

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Mujhey ghum woh dey raha hay magar iss pe chahta hay
Mein hisaab na rakh paaoN, woh hisaab bhool jaaye

thnx for sharing this beautiful ghazal........Vivo

system June 23, 2005, 1:39pm 20

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^ u r welcome :-)