mujhey dur hai..

system · January 28, 2003, 6:42pm

Meri shayeri
meray ahsasaat ka izhaar sahi
lakin meray dil main
aik aisa alaoo roshan hai
jis ki aanch sey
kaghaz jul jata hai
mujhey dur hai
kuch nazmaiN na-mukammul reh jaien gi..

Dilsay · January 28, 2003, 6:45pm

Bohat khoob....

aur app kay sig.... tu masha Allah....

Khuda aap ko khush rakhay aur wo jald he faisla kar lay..........

Azad · January 28, 2003, 6:46pm

hummm waqee sochnay ki baat hay ...

Azad · January 28, 2003, 6:47pm

lol
on a 2nd thought, yaar sudaii itna loose ball na phainka karain

Barray shareer khayalon say khailta hay dil
koi khayal sada ban gia to kia hogaa!!!!!!!!! ;)

arifnawaz1 · January 28, 2003, 9:35pm

Wonderful :k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 29, 2003, 1:13am

wow!!!
beautiful choice:k::k:

NikamiJano · January 29, 2003, 1:47am

Re: mujhey dur hai..

:k:

Ana · January 29, 2003, 2:25am

Lovely. I think there is one like this in English as well.. don't remember who wrote it tho....

nikii · January 29, 2003, 2:42pm

nice :)

Dragon_King · January 29, 2003, 4:19pm

:k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · January 29, 2003, 7:48pm

nice one vivaaaaaaa

system · January 29, 2003, 7:50pm

Thanx Dilsay,
Allah aap ko hi khush rakhey..

Azad, jee nahi, kissi khayaal k sada banney ka koi imkaan nahi hai.. bay-fikr rahain..
Thanx

Thanx All…