Mujhey Dukh ho ga

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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na rasta bedla, na sada di
na kisi sada ko palet ker pehchana tum ney
kaif ho apney iradey sey ubb
Kuda ra, nebhao…jis key bhi sath ho
iss ko apnao, iss ko izzet do
aur apna khiyal rakho

na ho teng apney hi dil mey, ger jo ho tow
ubb na karo koe pashemani,
verna dekho,
Mujhey dukh ho ga

Dushwari

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Re: Mujhey Dukh ho ga

I like the concept very much. But I feel it could have been put in a better way. Nevertheless, a commendable effort :):k: Thanx for sharing it with us Dushwari.

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Re: Mujhey Dukh ho ga

hi Amal,
the thoughts of this poem are incomplete, i agree.
the experience which caused them, is just as incomplete.
often, people dont leave anything to be said.
still, this is a well-wishing from the sincerity that did not give way to insensitivity after its disgrace.
Dushwari

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Re: Mujhey Dukh ho ga

Very nice poem Dushwari thanks for sharing:-)

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Re: Mujhey Dukh ho ga

thanks, Gul-e-tashbeeh.

Dushwari