Re: Mujhe zindagi ki talaash hai
bahot Khoob…achchhii koshish hai par abhii iskii nok palak saNwaarne meN gunjaaish hai. is kalaam kaa zaraa saa make-up kar deN. Urdu ke mushkil alfaaz aur fiqroN kii aameszish bhali lagii. aapke kalaam meN alfaaz ke aage peechhe karne se ravaanii aur mazeed bahtar ho saktii hai. aap na kalaam likhne ke ba’d use halkii aawaaz meN gungunaa kar dekh liyaa kareN isse ravaanii ko bahtar banaane meN madad milegii. aapko Khud pataa chal jaayegaa k kahan kahaN luknat [paRhne meN zabaan laRkhaRaa jaaye aur ravaanii majrooH ho jaaye] paayii jaatii hai.
zaraa sii meHnat kareN to yeh zameeN baRii zarKhez hai. 
good job, Madz!