**mujhy be-khudi ki hai aarzuu mujhe qurbtoN ka khumar de
mere ang ang maiN yuuN uter khud ko mujh maiN utaar day
** tu jo puur puur maiN hai bus gaya to duuriyoN ka jawaz kia
meri zindagi mere paas aa meri be-kali ko sanwaar day
meri zindahi pe muheet hain wohi wahshataiN wohi duryaaN
mai khizaN raseda si shaam hooN mujay apne rukh ki bahaar de
meri bebasi hai baja magar mere shaoq ka bhi hisaab kar
maiN seeha naseeb jo hooN agar mera naseeb bhi sanwar day
hai nazar nazar maiN teri justaju tu meri wafa ki hai aabruu
kabhi yuuN bhi ho mere rubaroo mujhe jaan se he guzar day
mujhay is tarha se tu yaad aa teri yaad ka gumaa’N na ho
tu meray khayal maiN yuuN sama mera haraf haraf nikhaar day
Re: Mujhe jaan se hi guzaar de!
simply beautiful :k:
muddii
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Re: Mujhe jaan se hi guzaar de!
Splended Splended Choice JJW:)
Daanie
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Re: Mujhe jaan se hi guzaar de!
wonderful sharing :)
Re: Mujhe jaan se hi guzaar de!
Kya Kehnay Lajwaab Ghazal 
Re: Mujhe jaan se hi guzaar de!
Bohat khoob.. :k:
Sheal
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Re: Mujhe jaan se hi guzaar de!
bohot bohot achi hai JJW :k:
Re: Mujhe jaan se hi guzaar de!
nice JW :k:
Aryaan
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Bohat khoob Jhanjharewali..:k:
S.786
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Re: Mujhe jaan se hi guzaar de!
zabar dust shair ka naam tu likha huta :D
Re: Mujhe jaan se hi guzaar de!
Jahjharwaliyeh,
Teri selection ka jawab nahiN
I am gobsmacked, Beautiful
hai nazar nazar maiN teri justaju tu meri wafa ki hai aabruu
kabhi yuuN bhi ho mere rubaroo mujhe jaan se he guzar day
Koyal
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Re: Mujhe jaan se hi guzaar de!
nice choise jwali :)
Re: Mujhe jaan se hi guzaar de!
zabar dust shair ka naam tu likha huta :D
jab pata hota hei zaroor likhti hoon
Re: Mujhe jaan se hi guzaar de!
*** thank u for such a flattering review!***
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thank u dear friends for appreciating
abeeha
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Bht kamal kia hy JW:bb:
specially this one,
hai nazar nazar maiN teri justaju tu meri wafa ki hai aabruu
kabhi yuuN bhi ho mere rubaroo mujhe jaan se he guzar day
n whole poem is zabardast.