mujhe afsoas hai sonaa…
key meri nazm sey hou kar guzartey waqt baarish mein
pareeshaani hui tum kou
barey be-waqt aatey hein yahaan saawan,
meri nazmoun ki galiyaan yoon bhi aksar bheegi rehti hein
kai gad-dhoun mein paani jamaa rehtaa hai
agar paon parey tou moch aa jaaney kaa khatra hai
mujhe afsoas hai lakin…
pareeshaani hui tum kou key meri nazm mein kuch roshni kam hai
guzarety waqt dehleezoun key patthar bhi nahin dikhtey
key meray pairoun key naakhun kitni baar tootey hein
hui muddat key chouraahey pey ab bijli ka khambaa bhi nahin jaltaa
pareeshaani hui tum kou…
mujhe sach much afsoas hai !
Re: Mujhe afsoas hai
mujhe bhi ye sab padh kar boht afsos huwa.. ke aakhir Urdu shayari pe kaisa waqt aa gaya hai 
Re: Mujhe afsoas hai
hahaha...... gulzar ki poem hai.
Re: Mujhe afsoas hai
achi hai.. per Gulzaar ki poems main jo tashbeehaat aur ista'aare hote hain uss se khali hai
Re: Mujhe afsoas hai
agreed but gulzaar ki poems mein aksar aisi wording hoti hein ke poem upload karna ajeeb lagta hai, jou sahi mili woh kar di 
Re: Mujhe afsoas hai
ab Gulzar, Ismail Meerathi ki zubaan main to likhne se rahe.. but wait.. he wrote ‘ustare se nai, chaqoo se qasai, kaate ga nahin to kya kare ga bhai’
Re: Mujhe afsoas hai
main nai pehlay apky comment parhay phir poem parhna start ki. jb 3rd line pe ponhcha to mere monh chai ka ghont meri lcd pe parrtay parrrtay hi reh gya.
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