SJ
November 2, 2007, 9:22am
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Aj ki Tazaa Nazam…
Mujhay Tum Batao Akhir…
Maree Chahaton Ki Jholee
Taree bayrukhee nay bhar de
Tujhay Jageer-e-Ghum milee The
So Meray Naam Tou Nay Kar de
Tujhay jab Pukara Mein Nay
Tou kabhi Na Sath Payaa
Maree Rah Guzar Pay har Dum
RahaBay Basee Ka Sayaa
Taree Ankh ki Chamak mein
Maree Roshni Nahin Thee
Taree Arzoo Ki Shamma
Jalee,Aur He Kahin Thee
Mujhay Kuch pata Nahin Hai
Tum Ko Tou sab pata Hai
Jo tum nay mujh Ko De Hai
Kis Jurm Ki Saza Hai
Mujhay Tum Batao Akhir…
Gar kise Guma’n Mein mein nay
Apni Chahaton Ka Diya..
Teray Dar Pay Rakh Diya tha
Aik Teray Junoo’n Ki khatir
Sab Kuch Bula Diya tha…
Tou…Kya Bura Kiya Thaa!!!
Tou…Kya Bura Kiya tha
Re: Mujhay Tum Batao Akhir…
Sensatinal Poem Sonia..
it reminded me all deep grieves that were hidden within.. really beautiful..
Ali_2
November 2, 2007, 9:46am
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Re: Mujhay Tum Batao Akhir…
its really awesome
PS wo hai kaun jis nay ye kia hai
SJ
November 2, 2007, 9:47am
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Re: Mujhay Tum Batao Akhir…
LOl…
Bro let me find him phir bataon ge app ko…Danda tayyar rakhna app:cb:
SJ
November 2, 2007, 9:48am
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Re: Mujhay Tum Batao Akhir…
Bhai kaha tha na…red wala rose pasand hai mujhay…
nahin mujhay koi aisa ghum tou nahin:D
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SJ
November 2, 2007, 9:53am
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Re: Mujhay Tum Batao Akhir…
redidentity:
U r really Sweet Bro…
Re: Mujhay Tum Batao Akhir…
Buhat Aalaa … Mujhay Pata Naheen tha k mayri Sono Behna Likharee Bhi Hain
SJ
November 2, 2007, 11:32am
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Re: Mujhay Tum Batao Akhir…
app nay poocha he nahin tha na bhai:@:
thanks for appreciationz…
abb maree poems parhna mut boliay ga:)
Re: Mujhay Tum Batao Akhir...........
very nice :)
SJ
November 2, 2007, 11:38am
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Re: Mujhay Tum Batao Akhir...........
very nice :)
I Know..................:)
waisay thanks!!!
Re: Mujhay Tum Batao Akhir…
kes ne kaha tah mere nam kero seb koch
SJ
November 2, 2007, 12:48pm
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Re: Mujhay Tum Batao Akhir…
:aq:
SJ
November 2, 2007, 12:49pm
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Re: Mujhay Tum Batao Akhir…
tumharay naam kya karna hai…tum tou khud he qabzaa kar laytey ho:snooty:
Re: Mujhay Tum Batao Akhir…
khod dia tah me ne kabzha nehe kia :halo:
SJ
November 2, 2007, 12:53pm
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Re: Mujhay Tum Batao Akhir…
Mein nay kab diya???
Saboot lao na:naraz:
Re: Mujhay Tum Batao Akhir…
nehe nehe ap sabot lao ke ap ne nehe dia
SJ
November 2, 2007, 12:56pm
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Re: Mujhay Tum Batao Akhir…
mein nay kah diya ye he kafi hai…
Re: Mujhay Tum Batao Akhir…
me ne bhe keh dia wo bhe kafe he
SJ
November 2, 2007, 12:58pm
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Re: Mujhay Tum Batao Akhir…
Tumhara Aitbaar kon karay…Rahee baat maree…I stick to ma wordz:snooty: