mujhay har kaam say pehlay....................

SJ · February 5, 2007, 7:56am

mujhay har kaam say pehlay

sahar say shaam say pehlay

ye he ek kaam karna hai

tumhara naam layna hai

tum he ko yaad karna hai

kay jab bhi dard peena hai

kay jab bhi zakhm seena hai

mujhay jab jaam layna hai

tumhara naam layna hai

tumhee ko yaad karna hai

tumhareyaad hai dil mein

kay ik sayyad hai dil mein

koi barbaad hai dil mein

issay aabaad karna hai

tumhara naam layna hai

tumhee ko yaad karna hai

Addie · February 5, 2007, 8:01am

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tumhareyaad hai dil mein
kay ik sayyad hai dil mein

koi barbaad hai dil mein
issay aabaad karna hai

Kiya baat hai

SJ · February 5, 2007, 9:08am

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acha!:)

aabla_pa · February 5, 2007, 10:23am

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haan wakaee. Kya baat hai. Zabardast hai :)

SJ · February 5, 2007, 10:25am

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wasi bhai ki poem hai!................:)

aabla_pa · February 5, 2007, 10:35am

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yaeks! ehem ehem. WeLL, Khoob hai. Meri dua bhot jaldi qabool ho gaee. Kaash or bhi kuch maang lia hota dua mein

SJ · February 5, 2007, 10:39am

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konsee du’a?u were offending wasi bhai…tum tu mausam say bhi jaldi badal gay!

aabla_pa · February 5, 2007, 10:53am

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I havent read ur WASI BHAI. CLI wali poetry parh kar mein or kehta bhi to kya kehta.

"HUM TO SEEDHI BAAT KARTAY HEIN KHAFA KOI BHI HO"
:)

kher ye sab to mazaq ki baat thi. my remarx about ur WASI BHAI, showed nothing, but my ignorance. Aap wasi bhai ko parhti hein to yaqeenan bhot achay shair hongay. But again, the aim is not hurt anybody's feelings. Bura laga ho to maaf keejiye ga.

SJ · February 5, 2007, 11:08am

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nahin...........kuh bhi bura nai laga...................mein bhi mazaq he kar rahee thee...................we ppl gather here to share happiness................n not to fight..........am i right?:)

Mysterious_Woman · February 5, 2007, 2:30pm

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excellent wording!

farishta2 · February 5, 2007, 2:34pm

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KIA BAAT HEI!! BOHAT KHOOB.

SJ · February 6, 2007, 8:33am

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thanx for appreciation friends!

_Moon_Corona · February 6, 2007, 8:55am

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khobsurat sharing **
**keep it up.