Tum apna runj o gham apni perashani mujhay day du
Tumhein inki kasam yeh dukh yeh hairani mujhay day du
Mein daikhun tu sahi duniya tumhein kaisi satati hay
koi din k liye apni nigahbani mujhay day du
yeh mana mein kisi kabil nahi hun in nigahoon mein
bura kia hay is dil ki weerani mujhay day du
Hope u Lot will Like it…
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yeh mana mein kisi kabil nahi hun in nigahoon mein
bura kia hay is dil ki weerani mujhay day du
very nice jee :)
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shukran jee!
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hummm
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Its Very Nice… Tnx for Sharing… 
Is it SAHIR ?? I think it is… 
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Salaamz we Rehma,
Scorpion yeh ek ghazal k chand ashaar hein…
mujhay kaffi pasand hein.
Enjoy!
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Pasand tou Mujhay bhi haiN.. but… Banday ne Arz kia tha ke… Kia Ye SAHIR ki Poetry hay… ?
Meanz… ke.. Ye.. SAHIR Ludhianvi ke Ashaar haiN ..
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I am not too sure scorpion ji..
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peom to achee hay magar.. if i go in details of it.. like in the meaning then i didn't like it.. cause agar apnee parayshani ap ko daykar waqti tasali ya chain to ayay ga.. but after that zindagee bar kayalay parayshani utani paraygee..
ap ko yah dil deewana to daydo.. magar per again zindagee bar badnami kay sath chalnee paraygee.. now it depends how u are reading it.. it can be positive and negative.. for me it was negative.. but still it is a nice one :)
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Nice one fara...
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Itni ziaada gehraai main jaanay ki zaroorat nahi hay, In asshaar main sirf ye bataya gayaa hay kay shaair apnay mukhatib ke liay kitna caring hay, to mera khayal se ye positive hi hay. Aur wesay bhi Positivity aur negativity depend karti hay perception per:
Two men saw a prisons’ bar
One saw dust, and other star
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it,s good fara
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Thanks folks for taking out the time to read my selection.
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Golden Scorpion:** Janab Janab.. Sahir he hein iskay dawaydaar... Janab aapki qayas-arayee durst hay.
Attia: Come on sista, u gotta look at things more positively. What do we do in life, if we dont have people to care for us, look afta us and be wid us when we need 'em da most?
We are all humans, and we all need somebody to fall back on...
so relax and chill... and buhat shukriya aapka k aap nay issay perhnay kay kabil jana!
Nakhan Ji: Shukran Bro
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Ranayee-e-Khayal:** apkay meray khayalat kaffi miltay jultay hein... perception he tu derwazay kholti hay duniya ko samghnay kay
kehtay hein na
behter yahi hay zeest ko hass ker guzar do
mehsoos kerugay tu musalsal azaab hay
Ghazal Rizvi: thanx jana..
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naheen daitee
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Kia? 
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fara kuch mang rahee thee,, mayn kion doun?
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Mein maangoon to dogee? 